Pg 12- “In the back bedroom he could hear trains passing. Lying beside him sleeping brother, he’d listen to the broad, low sound: faint, then rising, faint again, then high, beckoning whistles, then gone. The sound of it brought goose bumps. Lost in longing, Louie imagined himself on a train, rolling into country he couldn’t see, growing smaller and more distant until he disappeared.”…
The essay, “The F Word,” written by Firoozeh Dumas, fulfills its purpose to entertain with a humorous, enriching account of her interesting history of stories related to her hard-to-pronounce name. It also attempts to describe the way in which Americans respond to unfamiliar, foreign names. Dumas presents this engaging essay that holds the reader’s attention by making it a very fun piece to read. This work was originally incorporated into an excerpt titled “Funny in Farsi: A Memoir of Growing Up Iranian in America (2003). This essay written by Firoozeh Dumas utilizes the appeal of emotion and the use of an informal, entertaining tone to draw in the audience. She starts out by using a mix of sympathy and humor and then gets serious to inform…
I believe the writer could’ve crafted a much stronger essay if they thoroughly understood what the prompt was asking. It seemed as if they had an idea of what they were writing about but not enough understanding to go in to detail.…
2. What views does the author have of landlords, the "young street roughs," and the dispossessed German woman? What do his views of each have in common?…
I like the fact that he is very detailed in the beginning of his essay; very meticulous on…
Her introduction had an effective attention grabber, which was an entertaining recollection of an event in the ladies restroom. While in the restroom she lost her balance and ended up falling into the toilet. This really grabbed my attention and let me know that this was going to be an interesting read. It made me want to know what was going to happen next. The tone she uses throughout her essay is a serious but humorous one. She uses simple terms to define…
I really enjoyed the part of his essay where he talks about teaching and also substituting for a teacher who had a wild class. It very much reminds me of people I knew in…
4. How does his description of and friendship with the black workmen help him evoke a response from his audience?…
One part of the essay "On Keeping a Notebook" that was fascinating to me was to see how a child that was given a notebook to keep her busy grew up with a notebook always by her side not to document her thoughts but to keep a record of what she saw. Somewhat, like stories about other people's lives. Anoher particular part was very heartwarming in the essay "Working at Wendy's," Joel had put his pride to the side to take care of his family, not asking his wife to stop attending school but put his life on hold to work at a fast food resturant that his child's peers and their parents go to eat. Lastly, in the essay "Graduation " Angelo the fact that "colored" people went to school was supprise but to only have a few schools after Jr. High was…
it retells the story too much and needs fixing but i think that i have almost done this with my final copy, please e-mail me on kippa_dog@hotmail.com if you can think of a better way of putting it.also, make sure that the Language is set to your countrys in microsoft word and fix all the "errors" made by my document seeing as im from Australia. with all that done, heres the Essay, esse!…
1. Using the photograph of the back steps of apartments on Chicago’s South Side and the excerpt from a Chicago commission report, explain the appeal of suburban life for Chicago residents in the 1940s and ’50s. How does your answer relate to the experiences and ambitions of the Younger family in the play?…
While teachers in the classroom should aim to give students the best education possible they do have many students who have issues outside of school. This may cause a student not to focus on studies when not in class. Many students deal with issues of divorce, drugs, and poverty. These issues in the home can weigh greatly on a student trying to reach their goals of completing high school or earning a degree. Teachers should take into account the students home life and if needed should modify their teaching to help these students succeed.…
Though I get the main purpose of this essay, I don’t really think it has created an effect on me. Part of it is because I cannot relate to the character, another is that I know the narrator too well that I know what is going to happen. Everyone knows what is going to happen. Her personality is so set in stone that the room for interpretation is limited. We all know she is super anxious, worrisome, and over-protective from the way she talks to the audience, the way she thought of another woman over the screen, the way she rolls the stroller on the street. In addition, everything is so crystal clear and evident that there is no much need to go back and flip through the story once again to understand the underlining purpose. The ambiguity element is missing in this essay, thus makes this work less appealing and less effective on…
The train station itself is another way the writer uses the setting to portray the human condition in this story. The station, a common ground or meeting place, is representative of the relationship between the American and Jig. The tracks leading in and out of the station describe the emotional pathways each of them takes. The American is almost exactly opposite to Jig, free spirited and not wanting a…
Upon laying my eyes on this piece of "fine literature", I knew that I wasn't going to enjoy it too much. To my surprise, once I read each line at least twice, and broke each sentence down, I was able to actually from an a opinion, actually, more than one opinion. In the essay, I found that there are many things that I agree with, many that I disagree with, and many that I have mixed feelings about.…