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A Braided Narrative
Coming home late from my wrongly assigned biology class, college was already a disaster. Two sorry knocks unfortunately came about my onion, scented worn-out dorm. I opened my door to find an *aged* police officer. “You’re a main suspect for the murder of the biology teacher, I’ve come to take you in for questioning.” he stated.
I stood shocked, staring at my *dark pigmented* hands.
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