The author provides no evidence whatsoever, which makes their essay weak. One fallacy in the essay was it was
hard to exactly tell who the author was attacking; liberals, liberal feminists, or both? Also, it was extreme and crooked to say that "Liberals justify their support their support in the name of multiculturalism - the relative equality of every society, even if they legalize the honor killing of rape victims by their own family members and institutionalize spousal abuse.", since it isn't true, it is just the author just trying to negatively manipulate the readers view on liberals. It also seems as if the reader hasn't really touched feminism in the school choice paragraph, but just attacked liberals. Also, the author seems to think liberals believe men are born above women, which makes me, the reader, think the author hasn't done fair research on this topic.