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Afterlife Secreted: A Short Story
Afterlife Secreted Tofu is a bad child who lives with a loyal father. Tofu misbehaves a lot, but is loyal to his dad. Tofu’s dad knows what his nature is and tries to lighten him up, but he takes the wrong turn as he goes to the haunted tomb where he had discovered Khufu’s obelisk. His dad had clearly forgotten what had been wrote on the obelisk about secret afterlife, and to this date, no one knows where they both are. Mist filled the tomb’s air and echoes spawned by the winds filled the passage. Tofu jumped up and down restlessly through the dust and choked on a piece of lint. “Yuck!”, he grumbled as he spit out the wet piece of lint. He grumpily slided through the rough, dusty road.”I am just an ordinary child, why does life have to be unfair?” His dad soon broke in,“Just do not worry, we will …show more content…
What ha-”And the last words of Tofu that could be hardly heard were,”Bye.” Julius was surprised, but soon an obelisk hit him. It was made of alabaster, he knew this had to be of Khufu. Julius scrambled through the hieroglyphic words and translated the writing. All he could bring to life was”The naughty will be punished to silent death, and the lord Khufu will rise to the modern age replacing the naughty one who dares trot into his tomb!”Julius could not believe this. All he remembered last time was that it talked about his secrets, but this? Julius fell to the ground in tears, with the fact that his only child was replaced by a Egyptian menace who had more ruthlessness than Tofu.
Soon, more than fifty obelisks fell, all of them cursed. Soon, the cursed Tofu rose, with red bloody eyes.”No one dares to touch my life”, he said in a snarly, vicious voice. Khufu is inside Tofu. Afterlife is a true concept.
To this day, no one knows where his Dad and Tofu are, again. Even the story of secret afterlife is lying under the covers of the haunted tomb, which was now left down to the biggest family in the whole egyptian kingdom. A family of fifty

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