Aggressive Dogs The “Big Idea” that I chose to write about is Aggressive Dogs. The thesis statement that I have chosen is “Oweners are responisble for canine aggression, due to the fact of how the train and raise their animal”. I will be mainly focusing on pit bull dogs. We can solve this problem
(and raise awarness) through educating pit bull owners. I think the thesis statement works good with the topic due to the research that I have conducted. Though some people may disagree I think my thesis statement is strong and effective. With the research that has been conducted there is a solution to dog aggression. I will develop an effective argument to support my claim about misconceptions of the pit bull breed. As I do further research I will continue to search for reliable sources from different sites including but not limited to: peta.org, aspca.org, ambassdorpitbulls.org, absolutek9.com, and animalplanet.com. Some illutrations that I may use will be images of an aggressive dog being praised by his owner after a vicious fatality over another dog. Many dog owners don’t understand the serious of aggression. If I was to submit this proposal to all the animal shelters, veterinarian, and all the pit bull owners I would say there is no such thing as a dog being born aggressive. A dog is like a child, it needs to be taught right from wrong. I think it is wrong to try to ban one type of dog because of the misconception of the breed. The owners of the pit bull know the consequences of raising and training a dog to be viscous but still some people chose to still do it. The only people raising these kinds of dogs in my opinion is people who are criminals, gang members, and people selling drugs. Unless you plan of breaking the law there is no other reason to train or make a dog aggressive. This type of behavior will or can hurt you or your animal.
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References: Peta.org Animalplanet.com Ambassadorpitbulls.org Absolutek9.com