Agriculture Drafting
Benefits of Agriculture in Malaysia
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Among the main benefits that agriculture industry provides to the society can be viewed from social aspect, economic aspect and environmental aspect.
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A Firstly the main benefits that can be generated from agriculture industry is based on social view. 1) Agriculture industry can help society to create jobs, educate them and let them manage their food. a) Can help combat hunger i) Creates better living environment ii) A healthy life – when eat the nutrient food iii) No more disease –kwashiorkor, thyroid, constipation b) Educate people iv) Research on how to develop agriculture industry in Malaysia v) Inventing machine / food from research that had been done vi) Helps brings out families and community to work together towards development vii) People be more independent and empowered c) Creates jobs for the society viii) Youths should grab the opportunities and not too choosy in seeking jobs ( Mutalib Ismail, 2013)
Body Paragraph II A Secondly, the vital benefits that can be get from agriculture industry can be viewed from the economy aspect is create a better economy situation in Malaysia. 1) Malaysians do not rely on food from country outside anymore a) Malaysians do not need to pay for the high rate tax every year 2) Malaysians can make their extra income b) The citizens from the outskirt of town, they can invent agriculture based food. i) Farmers can learn how to innovate within market-led agriculture. Besides , the government also can support and facilitate innovation( Nieuwenhuis F.M Loek, 2002) ii) can export the food to all over world
c) Malaysians can produce compost from the leftover food and soil iii) leftover food can be used to make compost, instead of just throw it away just like that
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Introduction
Among the main benefits that agriculture industry provides to the society can be viewed from social aspect, economic aspect and environmental aspect.
Body Paragraph 1
A Firstly the main benefits that can be generated from agriculture industry is based on social view. 1) Agriculture industry can help society to create jobs, educate them and let them manage their food. a) Can help combat hunger i) Creates better living environment ii) A healthy life – when eat the nutrient food iii) No more disease –kwashiorkor, thyroid, constipation b) Educate people iv) Research on how to develop agriculture industry in Malaysia v) Inventing machine / food from research that had been done vi) Helps brings out families and community to work together towards development vii) People be more independent and empowered c) Creates jobs for the society viii) Youths should grab the opportunities and not too choosy in seeking jobs ( Mutalib Ismail, 2013)
Body Paragraph II A Secondly, the vital benefits that can be get from agriculture industry can be viewed from the economy aspect is create a better economy situation in Malaysia. 1) Malaysians do not rely on food from country outside anymore a) Malaysians do not need to pay for the high rate tax every year 2) Malaysians can make their extra income b) The citizens from the outskirt of town, they can invent agriculture based food. i) Farmers can learn how to innovate within market-led agriculture. Besides , the government also can support and facilitate innovation( Nieuwenhuis F.M Loek, 2002) ii) can export the food to all over world
c) Malaysians can produce compost from the leftover food and soil iii) leftover food can be used to make compost, instead of just throw it away just like that
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