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all about me
Kaylee Philbeck
Michael Henthorn
Second Block
May 30, 2014
Table of Contents Narrative Essay Reflection- Who are you? … Page 1
Who are you? … Page 2-?
Persuasive Essay Reflection- Declaration of Independence… Page ?
Declaration of Independence… Page ?-?
Expository/Literary Analysis Reflection- Fahrenheit 451 Character Analysis … Page
Fahrenheit 451 Character Analysis … Page ?-? Narrative Essay Reflection- Who are you? The prompt presented within the first week of the new semester was to compose an essay about myself. The first thing that came to mind was the simple fact I was going to fail. I had to ask several questions before even completely understanding the requirements. We had to evaluate who we were, why we were here, and how Mr. Henthorn could be of service to us. I worked for many days composing this essay; including many rough drafts and bad ideas. The first part of the prompt was by far the hardest, it took the most thinking. Prewriting consisted mainly of sitting around trying to figure out who I actually thought I was. I wrote about 3 rough drafts before deciding on how I was going to present myself. After finally liking one draft, I did numerous amounts of editing. The editing process was difficult for me because I did not want to mess up my very first essay and make a bad first impression. Revising the essay was much simpler with help from peers. The benefits of using a formatted writing process are ultimately what lead to my higher grade. This process helps to organize, edit, and write with ease during difficult assignments. To better organize I wrote many drafts and bulleted list of important ideas to include, which helped to be sure I included all necessary points. Editing was made easier by my peers who read over the essay and gave me feedback from different perspectives to improve the flow and structure of the essay. And lastly, the ease of writing the final draft came from this described process used. Without this

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