An unexpected experience
Keylianys Banks
Professor de Yong
English 101
July 15, 2013
An Unexpected Experience This happened on Saturday of the 2006. I was a happy young of only 20 years. I already had a baby of one year old. I worked in two jobs during the whole week and on weekends I liked to have fun and spend time with my baby. That Saturday was celebrating a Carnival where they were good artists; they had machines, and delicious foods and drinks. I wanted to go to the Carnival to have great time with my baby. I had three friends. They were Ruth, Vanessa, and Jessica. They were youthful and they wanted to go with me to the Carnival. However, their moms did not give them permission so we decided to lie. I told to their moms that we would have a pajama party in my apartment. But the truth was that we went to the carnival to have a good time without knowing that we would be passing a terrible and unexpected experience. On the way to the Carnival we plan what we were going to do. Vanessa and Jessica wanted to meet new friends, eat, and have a good time. On the other hand, I just wanted to see my ex-boyfriend John. He was a good guy, but very unfaithful. I just wanted to see him and for my surprise I saw him in the Carnival. I saw him from a distance and I kept away from him. Instead of looking at John I went to play with my son Danny. The place was very crowded and I began to feel uncomfortable. My aunts always said that was not good to be in crowded places. My aunts said, “Keyla, you never know what might happen in those parties because unfortunately the young resolves everything with fights and guns, we say it for your sake.” These advices passed through my mind but I keep having fun with my baby and my friends. They felt happy to be in the Carnival, but scared because of the lie that we told to their moms. I and my friends were feeling tired of walk around the carnival that we decide to sit down to rest. We sit down and in front of us there were police officers armed as part
Professor de Yong
English 101
July 15, 2013
An Unexpected Experience This happened on Saturday of the 2006. I was a happy young of only 20 years. I already had a baby of one year old. I worked in two jobs during the whole week and on weekends I liked to have fun and spend time with my baby. That Saturday was celebrating a Carnival where they were good artists; they had machines, and delicious foods and drinks. I wanted to go to the Carnival to have great time with my baby. I had three friends. They were Ruth, Vanessa, and Jessica. They were youthful and they wanted to go with me to the Carnival. However, their moms did not give them permission so we decided to lie. I told to their moms that we would have a pajama party in my apartment. But the truth was that we went to the carnival to have a good time without knowing that we would be passing a terrible and unexpected experience. On the way to the Carnival we plan what we were going to do. Vanessa and Jessica wanted to meet new friends, eat, and have a good time. On the other hand, I just wanted to see my ex-boyfriend John. He was a good guy, but very unfaithful. I just wanted to see him and for my surprise I saw him in the Carnival. I saw him from a distance and I kept away from him. Instead of looking at John I went to play with my son Danny. The place was very crowded and I began to feel uncomfortable. My aunts always said that was not good to be in crowded places. My aunts said, “Keyla, you never know what might happen in those parties because unfortunately the young resolves everything with fights and guns, we say it for your sake.” These advices passed through my mind but I keep having fun with my baby and my friends. They felt happy to be in the Carnival, but scared because of the lie that we told to their moms. I and my friends were feeling tired of walk around the carnival that we decide to sit down to rest. We sit down and in front of us there were police officers armed as part