In Stanza 2, the man washes himself up at a tap where he steps into mud, as there is always mud at taps. ‘Vandals Lavatory’, Grey uses the word ‘Vandal’ as he does not appreciate people vandalizing the streets to ruin the beauty of the Australian Coast Lines. The persona flushes the toilet and gets a chill whilst flushing, it’s the use of an actual toilet that gives him this chill as hitchhikers if not able to find a nearby toilet will often go in a bush. In Stanza 3, the man eats a floury apple, which he supposedly found in a supermarket bin where you find ruined goods. Grey uses personification ‘At this kerb sand crawls by’ to demonstrate that it was almost like the path was covered in sand moving slowly from the light wind about. ‘Car after car now-its like a boxer warming up with the heavy bag, spitting air’ the cars on the street are busy going somewhere. The use of simile is comparing the cars to a boxing match, how dangerous and violent of each car passing is like a punch by a boxer.…
Their new home which is shared by strangers can be seen to cause strain on the individuals. Their constant “wondering” as to “who would be coming next” was emphasised by the use of enjambment. By allowing “who” to fall at the beginning of the line it highlights their uncertainty of their new neighbours. Being put in a mass home with other immigrants they are almost excluded as members of Australian society. This can be seen in the final stanza, where Skrzynecki uses physical symbols to show their exclusion. The “barrier” at the main gate, “sealed off the highway/ from our doorstep”, these physical symbols suggest the migrant’s perception of their lack of welcome or belonging within Australia. The closing line of the poem “that had only begun / or were dying” highlights how their incarnation had a universal effect on them. None of the immigrants felt as though they belonged or were permanent. The subject of this poem uses carefully chosen diction to position the audience to feel empathy towards the migrants, to share in their exclusion. Therefore, Skrzynecki successfully portrays the theme of belonging or absence of by using poetic devices such as tone, enjambment and…
Bruce Dawes poems explore the impacts of consumer culture and are an indictment of the growing materialism in modern society. In Enter Without So Much As Knocking (1962), Dawe portrays a world dominated by consumerism, which has lead to `conformity, and eroded the individuality of many people. The idea that our view of the world can only be seen through television and that our experience of life is restricted and controlled by it is highlighted in the satirical poem, Tele Vistas.(1977) This idea is revisited in The Not So Good Earth.(1966) Television in consumer society is the prime source of information and entertainment. Dawe expresses his concern that we have become desensitized to human suffering because it is presented to us as entertainment.…
The poem itself is discussing a man's journey from birth to death and how all around him life is interpreted by material possessions. At the beginning of the first stanza, the sentences have been made very short and simple, as if to demonstrate the thoughts of a new born child. The first voice that the baby hears when he is born is Bobby Dazzler, one of Australia's first game shows. The very first thing that the baby hears is not the voice of his mother, nor the voice of his father, but the voice of materialism. This first stanza instantly creates the feeling of a home in the 1950s, where television was something new. The ellipsis that connects the first and second stanzas demonstrates a change in time, in this case, a change of a couple of years.…
In the first stanza the sentence, "it's a singular, human thud", this line creates a picture in the mind that there's feel of isolation and lonesomeness, and as it goes on the theme of nature reveals itself even more eg "only the wind through the sparse leaves".…
Bruce Dawe is an Australian poet who uses the voice of ordinary Australians in his poetry. He uses universal concepts to create challenging themes and highlight the concerns of life and society. Distinctive ideas and techniques are presented in Dawe’s poetry and this is evident in the poems “Enter without so much as knocking” and “Weapons Training”.…
The Poem Enter Without So Much as Knocking uses many poetic and literary techniques. These include imagery, similes, themes of sexism and stereotypes and rhetorical question. Dawe utilises the whole poem as imagery for the boy’s life. Dawe's creative sense made it so the audience who would read this poem would see that his life was a game show even in death. This example can be found when Dawe explores death in his sixth stanza. ''… gave him back for keeps/ the old automatic smile with nothing behind it, winding the whole show up with a/ nice ride out to the underground metropolis:/ permanent residentials, no parking tickets, no taximeters/ ticking, no Bobby Dazzlers here, no down payments,/ nobody grieving over halitosis/ flat feet shrinking gums falling hair.'' In this example, Dawe’s use of imagery…
The poem immediately opens the scene by describing the beginning of a boy’s life and how all around him is material possessions. The first thing that the baby hears when he is born is Bobby Dazzler, one of Australia's famous game shows greeting him “Hello,hello., hello all you lucky people”. The very first thing that the baby hears is not the voice of his mother, nor the voice of his father, but the voice of materialism. This portrays that society has been overly consumed by technology, effectively supported as they degrade the significance of the baby’s parent’s role.…
Robert Frost, in his poem “A Dust of Snow,” reveals that surprising moments can pull us out of serious depressions. He establishes this idea first by using the symbolic meaning of crow to create unhappiness and darkness; second, by the diction of the word snow which would normally mean a slow accumulation, but in this poem, this man’s life has slowly come to the point where everything is bad for him; third, by the connotative use the hemlock tree which is a poisonous tree, but it is used to stirrup some good in the person’s situation; fourth, by ironically saying that the crow saved him and renewed hope and life to him; lastly, by the use of diction with the word rued which means regret, but in this poem, the crow stopped the man from doing…
“Enter Without So Much as Knocking” by Bruce Dawe is an example of a free verse poem because it refrains from any pattern or rhyme. The poem appears to be like a normal speech conversation. This type of form highlights and emphasizes the poem, creating a lot of emotion. The theme of this poem is human condition because it includes the life cycle. It is about the life of a man from the day he arrived on earth to the day he left. It also considers the pointlessness of life by expressing all the rules and regulations we have controlling our lives. This relates to the quote because it showing a clear understanding of our life on this planet.…
Bruce Dawe explores the complexities of modern life in Homo Surburbiensis and Enter Without So Much as Knocking. Dawe conveys the ideas through references to everyday life and what the protagonists experience throughout their lives. The author’s perspective on life is contradictory in the pair of poems and this is shown through the use of imagery, description of the characters and the tone of his language. In both poems, the main characters are not seen as individuals but are used as metaphors to represent the rest of the people within that world or society.…
In this peom the Narrator tells us at many places about the economic status of the little girl in different ways. In the beginning "when i was a little girl in indianapolis", indianapolis is a subarban area, not a good economy there. It has small towns there and so just by this we can figure out that girl is not from a rich family or place. in the next line it says "sitting on the doctors porches with post dawn pre debs".Sitting on the doctors porches refers to someone sitting on the steps and doing nothing. It shows as someone who has no job or has nothing important to do, so they just sit and look around. It describes how the place where girl lives has people, who have not much t do and so they sit on door steps and kill time. when we read the next two lines of the peom, where is says "i wondered if life would give me a chance to mean". it relates with the fact that she is sitting there doing nothing and thinking she is worthless, and hoping life gives her a chance to make herself mean something important rather than sitting here. Narrator also mentions the slang language being used again and again in the poem like "usta" and the informal way she uses like "and other bullshit stuff".This potrays her surronding , how and where she is brought up, as the economic status is not good and we see where she llives is not with many educated people so the slang language is used alot.They talk about stuff which is not important while sitting and conversing,shows kind of place and people there are.…
Ignorance and materialism negatively affects humans some way or another, and society only increases these lifestyles. Whether or not we believe it, ignorance and materialism is a daily part in our lives today; thus, we cannot live without it. We try to ease our problems by blindingly accepting society’s norms and trends. Because we cannot formulate our own ideals and ways of life, we live in a false sense of justice and peace. In Tony Hoagland’s “Hard Rain,” the speaker witnesses these faults in our behavior at a shopping mall; however, he, similarly, is not able to escape that reality. The larger meaning of this poem, that we have no sense of individualism and morality, is specified by the author’s usage of diction and the disappointing, humorous, and controversial tone he uses to prove it.…
The structure of the poem can be separated in to two parts. The first half describes the soul's perception of the surrounding world as it's body first begins to wake up. This is set during the period between true consciousness and the dream world. In this moment reality becomes pure and timeless. In the third line, the author describes the soul “hanging bodiless and simple.” Using this kind of diction to set the tone as a sort of mock-seriousness and creates a sense of suspension and detachment from the world. Still within the beginning of the poem, the tone seems to sway between humor and spirituality. As an example of the humor used, the author writes “The morning air is all awash with angels.” Still conveying a strong sense of spirituality, this line also serves as a pun towards the angels being described through the hanging laundry just outside of the open window. It also gives the spiritual world a likeness of heaven, full of angels. The humor is in the word choice “awash” because it serves a double meaning. The first meaning is that the air is “full” of the angels, and the other meaning is the fact that people “wash” their laundry to make it clean and fresh again. The first half of the poems…
SETTING: On a sidewalk at the entrance to a building in the middle of the block.…