Analysis Of Hillary Windsor's Essay 'Alouette Anniversary'
An essay ‘Alouette Anniversary’ (Moran, Henderson, 2017) written by Hillary Windsor can be easily called a professional one, however there are some parts that might be improved, including thesis statement, introduction and conclusion.
The author does not use effective thesis statement in her essay. Even though she writes about the Alouette-I satellite launch, she does not include the main points. By writing about her main ideas in the introduction, Hillary Windsor would make readers understand what specifically the essay will be about. What is more, it would be better if the writer wrote more expanded introduction to provide more background information about the Alouette-I as a great number of readers might not know that it is the first Canadian
The author does not use effective thesis statement in her essay. Even though she writes about the Alouette-I satellite launch, she does not include the main points. By writing about her main ideas in the introduction, Hillary Windsor would make readers understand what specifically the essay will be about. What is more, it would be better if the writer wrote more expanded introduction to provide more background information about the Alouette-I as a great number of readers might not know that it is the first Canadian