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Annabeth gets a phone call as she was coming home from work. “Hello,” Annabeth said.

“SHE'S GONE” cried Anthony.

“What do you mean?” asked Annabeth.

“ASHLYN SHE’S GONE!” cried Anthony once more.

Then dead silence filled the car. “Where IS SHE”,

“i don't know I just got home and I see your Dad's car leave the house”.

“Dang it, I have something to tell you Anthony that I should have told you before.”

“What is it dear, as Anthony trembled at his words.” “I told you my dad went to prison a few times, but I never actually told you why”,

“The reason he went prison was because he's……..a…….P-p-psychopath. “WHAT!??! ,Anthony screamed in horror. Why haven't you told me this before.”

“He's dangerous and can't be trusted so follow
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She makes some deep, grunting noises as you twist your back and stretch your neck. Ashlyn grabbed her earbuds and her phone off her desk and ran straight down the stairs nearly tripping. But Ashlyn could smell the buttermilk pancakes and when She smelt the bacon her Nose twitched, brain sniffed, she can catch faint fumes of sizzling bacon drifting up from the kitchen. “Mmmmm” Ashlyn went when she walked in the kitchen. “I'm leaving for work in a half hour, or so, eat up”, exclaimed Annabeth.

Ashlyn finished up her scrumptious meal, as she waves goodbye to her mother. “ Your dad will be home shortly.” “Ok mom” replied Ashlyn.
A car approached the driveway, “that must be dad” she thought to herself. But when the car door opened it wasn't dad. It was a tall shady man with a grey mustache and he had the large grin on his face like he was going to kill somebody and feel happy about it. He went up to the door and “KNOCK”,KNOCK”, went the pounding sound of the door. “Ashlyn dear open up and let your dear old grandfather come in”. A chill went down my spine and I could feel all of my hairs stand.

“You are not my grandfather” I replied.

“Are sure because I believe I
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“He was going to kidnap me” I thought to myself, “I'm never gonna see the light again”.

He dragged me out to his big white van and there me in and hooked me to big metal chains and felt they weighed more than an elephant. Than I heard a car pull to our house and the door slams.

“Hold on on” he said as he started to laugh like a hyena on steroids.

He pulled quickly out of the driveway zoomed away like a race car doing spin outs, I could smell that nauseating smell of gas and it made me sick and cough a little.

“Where you taking me” I asked.

“Some place where you will like it much better than your own home.”

I scoffed “yeah right I'll never enjoy the likes of you mystery man.”

“I thought I told you who am but if you don't believe me you may be punished little girl whether you like it or not,” Said the strange man.

I gulped and never said a word that Entire car ride.

Annabeth goes a phone call as she was coming home from work. “Hello Annabeth said”,

“SHE'S GONE cried Anthony.”

“What do u mean” asked Annabeth,

“ASHLYN SHE’S GONE”, cried Anthony once more.

Than Dead silence filled the car. “Where IS SHE”,

“I don't know I just got home and I see your Dad's car leave the

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