Jealousy
Long Line
Jealousy is a crime drama which follows the actions of a young girl’s obsession with the man she loves, killing and lying her way out of mistakes she’s made.
Series Treatment
When Tiffani Russel met the new girl in town, Hayley Jardine she felt suspicious and uncomfortable about the girl’s presence around her boyfriend. The series opens with Tiffani taking love one step to far killing the girl to protect her relationship with boyfriend, Henry Spears. Tiffani’s actions sense Hayley’s mother to create a missing person’s report for her daughter. This leads to a town wide man hunt to find the missing girl and establish what happened to her. Amongst this Tiffani must create a web of lies to hide her actions. By episode 3 the body of the girl is found which leads to a new investigation, a homicide. …show more content…
A city detective arrives at Suburbia by episode 5.
The detective is constantly interrogating suspects and town people about the death of Hayley, but due to this regular citizen find out the truth about Tiffani’s lies. Due to this, Tiffani must silence anyone who knows leading to the death of more town members, including her boyfriend Henry. By episode 9 the detective establishes a case against Tiffani and heads to hers to arrest her. Tiffani aware of this fortifies her home and goes under siege against the detective and the local police force. By episode 10 nine police officers were killed by Tiffani leaving Tiffani and the detective alone. The show concludes with the two ending each other’s lives and a Ariel shot of Suburbia one last
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The show includes 10 episodes, each 45 minutes long. Its main story is during the present but frequently flashbacks to the crime and before the murder to create character among the people of suburbia.
Pilot Treatment
Act 1 (Chosen Scene for Final Product)
As darkness looms over the sleeping town of suburbia an evil is at play by the name of Tiffani Russel. Tiffani is dragging the corpse of new girl Hayley Jardine. She dumps the body down a hole and lights a match before throwing it onto the body. AS she watches it burn to ash there are flashback moments of three major scenes. The first is her meeting Hayley with her boyfriend Henry, second being her watching Hayley and Henry Talking to each other by a tree and finally her hitting Hayley with a bat in the back of the head. The scene then returns to Tiffani watching the body burn followed by the words 2 weeks earlier.
Act 2
The second act outlines the two key moments that led up to Tiffani killing Hayley. It starts with a calming shots of the town, allowing the viewer to establish a sense of a location and community in the early hours of the day. The bottom left will be time stamped and have a location to establish a time frame of the two weeks that lead to the climax. The first scene is them meeting one another. Out the front of Tiffani’s home, Hayley comes to introduce herself to Tiffani and Henry, who are talking to each other. They kick it off, but Henry and Hayley seem suspiciously close. The next major event is Hayley and Henry Talking by a tree getting close. Tiffani gets jealous and worried. You can see the escalation of her anger as the scene progresses where she goes and confronts Henry in the following scene about him wanting to leave her for Hayley. Henry had to calm Tiffani down and Hayley stormed out of the home leaving Henry Worried.
Act 3
The final act shows the major climax of the episode and the starting event that’ll kick of the whole series. Tiffani intercepts Hayley walking home from school with a cricket bat. She accuses her of stealing her man with tears flowing from her eyes. Hayley tries to calm Tiffani down, but Tiffani is too delirious to come to reason. Tiffani breaks down and Hayley tries to hug Tiffani. When Hayley comes close to Tiffani, she grabs her hand throws her to the ground and beats her to death. Tiffani then acknowledges what she’s done. The final scene repeats being at the beginning with Tiffani looking at the burning body and turns around and leaves the body burning in the background followed by an Arial shot of the sleeping town
Character Outline
Tiffani Russel
Tiffani is not normal. Her everyday normal teen girl persona is all a charade. Deep inside of her is a monster who seeks for the vengeance against anyone who come close to her boyfriend Henry. Sonny grew up in an abusive family. Her father died when she was only four, which impacted her mother severely. Her mother turned to drugs and later died due to an overdose. Tiffani was then sent to a foster home before being adopted by a family in a suburbia. She slowly becomes accustomed to the suburbs, finding the love of her life Henry. Her being mentally unstable will be her downfall, as she will do anything for the man she loves. Tiffani is the murder of the series and the main complication in the plot. She is the main antagonist of the show. Tiffani is a brunette with brown eyes, medium length hair and height and comes from a Caucasian decent
Hayley Jardine
Hayley is the victim of the vicious wrath of Tiffani. She’s 16 has blonde hair, blue eyes and is short for her age, with Caucasian decent. Hayley’s father is a high ranking officer in the military constantly moving neighbourhoods. When her family moves to Suburbia, she believed it was a place like all the others. She meets Henry and Tiffani and slowly becomes close to Henry. Her charismatic personality makes Henry fall for her even though he is taken. The two secretly have romantic relations which will lead to the young girl’s demise, creating the biggest investigation in the town of Suburbia to date. Hayley is the trigger of the events that haunt the town of Suburbia. Her character is killed off in the beginning but is responsible for the chain of events that conclude and progress the plot.
Henry Spears
Henry Spears is a major character being the key to Tiffani’s heart. Henry is kind and charismatic. He is the stereotypical goody guy being the captain of his basketball team and the high grades. Henry becomes a victim though after investigating into his girlfriend. Henry is medium height, brown eyes, black hair and of African descent.