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Bedroom Observation: A Short Story
The elevator stops in front of two big white doors. They open automatically when I step on front of them. Once inside, there is a is a long hallway with four rooms on each side.Each room had a chalkboard with a name hanging from them. I go upstairs to find a room for myself. I find a room at the very top of the stairs. I go into it and find a blank chalk board with a piece of chalk. I write my name and hang it on the door. I look at the clock and see that it's pretty late so i decide to go to bed. Under the covers, I think about what happened that day as I drift off to sleep.

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I've been here for two years and so far i've been to the UCP. I just got back from my second time there. This time we captured the leader of
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