Body Paragraph 'People Pleaser'
Thesis Paragraph 1. Title: People Pleaser 2. Hook (Wow ) Sentence: : It took me 32 years to realize pleasing everyone is impossible. I am a recovering people pleaser.
3. Essay Map: I had to Stop trying to please everyone I had to Learn to say NO I had to realize it is okay to put my family and myself first. 4. Thesis: I decided to quit trying to please everyone, learn to say no and realize I should put my family and myself first. Body Paragraphs Paragraph 1 A. Thesis sentence for body paragraph #1: Learning that I could not please everyone was the first step to quit …show more content…
. I had to be happy first.
B. Details and evidence for paragraph #1 As a hairstylist, it was my job to make sure all my clients were happy. Even if it meant coming in early, staying late or working seven days a week. I would miss my children’s baseball games and other activities all because I wanted to make sure my client came first. When I was deciding to go to nursing school, my biggest dilemma was how to tell my clients I will no longer be doing hair. I could here their voices in my head begging me not to go. Instead of letting everyone else decide what I was going to do, I realized if I was going to be happy I had to put myself first. Do not get me wrong, I enjoy taking care of people and I have a serving heart by nature. That is why I chose nursing. I realized to make my dreams and goals come true, I had to come first. Paragraph 2 A. Thesis sentence for body paragraph #2: The hardest part to quit always trying to please people was to learn how to say no.
B. Details and evidence for paragraph #2: Saying no made me feel so guilty. I hate disappointing
3. Essay Map: I had to Stop trying to please everyone I had to Learn to say NO I had to realize it is okay to put my family and myself first. 4. Thesis: I decided to quit trying to please everyone, learn to say no and realize I should put my family and myself first. Body Paragraphs Paragraph 1 A. Thesis sentence for body paragraph #1: Learning that I could not please everyone was the first step to quit …show more content…
. I had to be happy first.
B. Details and evidence for paragraph #1 As a hairstylist, it was my job to make sure all my clients were happy. Even if it meant coming in early, staying late or working seven days a week. I would miss my children’s baseball games and other activities all because I wanted to make sure my client came first. When I was deciding to go to nursing school, my biggest dilemma was how to tell my clients I will no longer be doing hair. I could here their voices in my head begging me not to go. Instead of letting everyone else decide what I was going to do, I realized if I was going to be happy I had to put myself first. Do not get me wrong, I enjoy taking care of people and I have a serving heart by nature. That is why I chose nursing. I realized to make my dreams and goals come true, I had to come first. Paragraph 2 A. Thesis sentence for body paragraph #2: The hardest part to quit always trying to please people was to learn how to say no.
B. Details and evidence for paragraph #2: Saying no made me feel so guilty. I hate disappointing