Book Analysis: Four Panels
PAGE 11 (4 panels)
PANEL 1
Elmer is behind bars, sitting on his uncomfortable jail bed. He spits out blood from his mouth. Ray and Stan are looking at him from the other end.
Ray Roberts
Figure out how did he get here?
Stan
Not yet.
Want to ask him?
Ray Roberts
You know I'd love to, but he won't talk no matter what.
PANEL 2
Ray looks at Stan and asks him a question. This is a small panel. Ray Roberts
Can we talk outside for a sec?
Stan
Sure.
PANEL 3
A big dialogue panel. Ray and Stan are outside. They're talking to each other. It's an early morning and everybody's asleep. The tiny Brookmeer is empty.
Stan
What's the matter?
Ray Roberts
Listen, I think I know what's going on...
Their leader-
Stan
-Dale.
Ray Roberts
Dale… He sent …show more content…
There's a huge chaos all over the room. Elmer is lying down lifeless on the floor with a bullet in his forehead. A puddle of blood is coming out of his head. Ray is on the other side of the room (the one that's closer to Stan). Ray's sitting on the floor and leaning on the wall. He seems very exhausted and battered. He has a big black eye in his right eye, his nose is bleeding and Elmer's revolver in his hands.
Ray
Hi there, buddy.
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PAGE 15 (6 panels)
PANEL 1
The town's nurse is holding an old fashioned ice pack. She's in her 70' and she has a white long hair. Behind her, we can see Stan standing and looking at Ray who's lying on his bed. Stan seems very serious.
Caption (Ray Roberts)
I thought there's no chance in hell my secret wasn't revealed.
No dialogue.
PANEL 2
A flashback of Ray overthrows the table in the jail room in anger. Some documents that were on the table are flying through the air. Elmer doesn't understand what's going on.
Caption (Ray Roberts)
In case that somehow the Genie never came out of the bottle…
Elmer
What do you think you're doin', fucktard?!
PANEL …show more content…
Caption (Ray Roberts)
It's still not enough, though…
No dialogue.
PANEL 6
A close-up of Ray's face with the ice pack on his black eye. He looks at the ceiling and probably thinks to himself.
Caption (Ray Roberts)
But we may die very soon, anyway.
No dialogue.
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PAGE 16 (5 panels)
PANEL 1
An Establishing shot of a big area of big old fashioned tents. The tents are arranged in a half circle, when the biggest tent (Dale's tent) is in the middle of the half circle. Right next to the tents, we can see the horses that The White Clovers ride on all the time. It's night time.
Caption
Meanwhile…
No dialogue.
PANEL 2
Someone young is standing in the entrance to a dark tent. Because of the darkness, we can barely see that the young lad is talking to some guy in a bed.
Willard
Dale, sorry for interrupting, but we need to talk, sir.
Dale
Wait for me outside.
PANEL 3
Dale wears his dirty jacket over his dirty white short shirt as well. Behind him, a little short haired girl wakes up from her sleep in a bed next to Dale's bed in her cute old pajama.
Lucy
Where are you going,
PANEL 1
Elmer is behind bars, sitting on his uncomfortable jail bed. He spits out blood from his mouth. Ray and Stan are looking at him from the other end.
Ray Roberts
Figure out how did he get here?
Stan
Not yet.
Want to ask him?
Ray Roberts
You know I'd love to, but he won't talk no matter what.
PANEL 2
Ray looks at Stan and asks him a question. This is a small panel. Ray Roberts
Can we talk outside for a sec?
Stan
Sure.
PANEL 3
A big dialogue panel. Ray and Stan are outside. They're talking to each other. It's an early morning and everybody's asleep. The tiny Brookmeer is empty.
Stan
What's the matter?
Ray Roberts
Listen, I think I know what's going on...
Their leader-
Stan
-Dale.
Ray Roberts
Dale… He sent …show more content…
There's a huge chaos all over the room. Elmer is lying down lifeless on the floor with a bullet in his forehead. A puddle of blood is coming out of his head. Ray is on the other side of the room (the one that's closer to Stan). Ray's sitting on the floor and leaning on the wall. He seems very exhausted and battered. He has a big black eye in his right eye, his nose is bleeding and Elmer's revolver in his hands.
Ray
Hi there, buddy.
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PAGE 15 (6 panels)
PANEL 1
The town's nurse is holding an old fashioned ice pack. She's in her 70' and she has a white long hair. Behind her, we can see Stan standing and looking at Ray who's lying on his bed. Stan seems very serious.
Caption (Ray Roberts)
I thought there's no chance in hell my secret wasn't revealed.
No dialogue.
PANEL 2
A flashback of Ray overthrows the table in the jail room in anger. Some documents that were on the table are flying through the air. Elmer doesn't understand what's going on.
Caption (Ray Roberts)
In case that somehow the Genie never came out of the bottle…
Elmer
What do you think you're doin', fucktard?!
PANEL …show more content…
Caption (Ray Roberts)
It's still not enough, though…
No dialogue.
PANEL 6
A close-up of Ray's face with the ice pack on his black eye. He looks at the ceiling and probably thinks to himself.
Caption (Ray Roberts)
But we may die very soon, anyway.
No dialogue.
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PAGE 16 (5 panels)
PANEL 1
An Establishing shot of a big area of big old fashioned tents. The tents are arranged in a half circle, when the biggest tent (Dale's tent) is in the middle of the half circle. Right next to the tents, we can see the horses that The White Clovers ride on all the time. It's night time.
Caption
Meanwhile…
No dialogue.
PANEL 2
Someone young is standing in the entrance to a dark tent. Because of the darkness, we can barely see that the young lad is talking to some guy in a bed.
Willard
Dale, sorry for interrupting, but we need to talk, sir.
Dale
Wait for me outside.
PANEL 3
Dale wears his dirty jacket over his dirty white short shirt as well. Behind him, a little short haired girl wakes up from her sleep in a bed next to Dale's bed in her cute old pajama.
Lucy
Where are you going,