Brandy Norwood
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Brandy Norwood
Wilbert Rosette
Charrie Catu
Group #1
Dear group members, this is just a brainstorming do not send to teacher but, please give me your feedback on what I have established in the proposal below thank you in advance .
Brandy
State your purpose. Do this clearly and concisely so that the reader knows immediately why you are writing.
To develop a healthier eating habit for student that work out in the gym instead of eating junk food while exercising eating healthier will help control weight, improve health conditions and diseases, and also boosts energy levels to perform better while exercising.
Give some background information about why you are proposing your suggestion so that the reader has a better understanding of the problem.
The gym should be a positive place to work out at, when you go to a vending machine to get a snack what would you eat? Snickers or a granola bar? Students don’t have the option to make that decision. Time and time again I see students having to make the wrong choice by eating unhealthy. Making vital decisions to choose to eat unhealthy because they don’t have healthier items to offer students. This effects the students in many ways this makes the student unfit after having a full work out, this puts more calories into the students body that they just burned while working out, and lastly it doesn’t stimulate the body as would a healthier choice item
Having them ready to go to class to be ready to participate in class.
State a solution to the problem; this is where you give specifics about your suggestion.
A solution to this problem would be to take an evaluation from the student body, where they are able to voice their opinion on if they fill that they want a healthier vending machine in the recreational center. If so move forward and by getting the
Brandy Norwood
Wilbert Rosette
Charrie Catu
Group #1
Dear group members, this is just a brainstorming do not send to teacher but, please give me your feedback on what I have established in the proposal below thank you in advance .
Brandy
State your purpose. Do this clearly and concisely so that the reader knows immediately why you are writing.
To develop a healthier eating habit for student that work out in the gym instead of eating junk food while exercising eating healthier will help control weight, improve health conditions and diseases, and also boosts energy levels to perform better while exercising.
Give some background information about why you are proposing your suggestion so that the reader has a better understanding of the problem.
The gym should be a positive place to work out at, when you go to a vending machine to get a snack what would you eat? Snickers or a granola bar? Students don’t have the option to make that decision. Time and time again I see students having to make the wrong choice by eating unhealthy. Making vital decisions to choose to eat unhealthy because they don’t have healthier items to offer students. This effects the students in many ways this makes the student unfit after having a full work out, this puts more calories into the students body that they just burned while working out, and lastly it doesn’t stimulate the body as would a healthier choice item
Having them ready to go to class to be ready to participate in class.
State a solution to the problem; this is where you give specifics about your suggestion.
A solution to this problem would be to take an evaluation from the student body, where they are able to voice their opinion on if they fill that they want a healthier vending machine in the recreational center. If so move forward and by getting the