What’s more? It relies too much on unsupported generalizations. As we can see that there are many questions posed, though in a strong tone and seemly a convincing way at the first sight. These questions cannot stand themselves for absence of adequate reasons and evidences. Therefore the author’s wording fails to convince me that flogging is a more preferable alternative than imprisonment, for bringing back flogging is neither the civilized way nor the only way. I’d like to share my analysis by sequence in accordance with the structure of the essay. At the very beginning, the author introduced the flogging employed by the Puritan to punish the criminals. After several examples given by the author, most of us may be impressed by the cruelty and savageness. Personally speaking, these materials worked to undermine the essay by convincing contrary evidence. After that the author started to talk about the shortness of imprisonment which seemed hardly to be supported by adequate evidence. If any, the evidence is not to the point to justify his opinion. To take a sentence for example in paragraph 4: Some 1.6 million Americans...the number is climbing. What does these data do with the imprisonment’s
What’s more? It relies too much on unsupported generalizations. As we can see that there are many questions posed, though in a strong tone and seemly a convincing way at the first sight. These questions cannot stand themselves for absence of adequate reasons and evidences. Therefore the author’s wording fails to convince me that flogging is a more preferable alternative than imprisonment, for bringing back flogging is neither the civilized way nor the only way. I’d like to share my analysis by sequence in accordance with the structure of the essay. At the very beginning, the author introduced the flogging employed by the Puritan to punish the criminals. After several examples given by the author, most of us may be impressed by the cruelty and savageness. Personally speaking, these materials worked to undermine the essay by convincing contrary evidence. After that the author started to talk about the shortness of imprisonment which seemed hardly to be supported by adequate evidence. If any, the evidence is not to the point to justify his opinion. To take a sentence for example in paragraph 4: Some 1.6 million Americans...the number is climbing. What does these data do with the imprisonment’s