Preview

Caroline Alternate Ending

Good Essays
Open Document
Open Document
654 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
Caroline Alternate Ending
One snowy night, I sat in my chamber hoping for morning to come. As I sat there, looking at all the Christmas lights outside, I tried to escape the depressing reality that I faced. I wasn’t quite ready to accept the loss of my dear Caroline. It had only been a few weeks, and now I would have to face the holidays alone. It felt wrong to do this without her; this was her favorite time of the year. I was lost in deep thought when, suddenly, I heard strange noise coming from the hall. I thought to myself, “It’s just someone at the door.” I sat there still and waiting, and then it came again. It was louder and more demanding this time.
“Oh! Sorry! I didn’t hear you. One moment,” I said. I opened the door, expecting to find someone waiting there,
…show more content…
Suddenly, it occurred to me.
“Caroline?” I asked, softly.
“Caroline,” a voice whispered back. I opened my window to get a better look, but no one was there. Then, out of nowhere, a small dove flew onto my windowsill. It sat still for a moment, then flew into my room and perched itself upon my picture of Caroline. I began to laugh at the little bird.
“What shall I call you, little bird?” I said, not expecting an
…show more content…
Do you think I will ever get over my sweet, dear Caroline?” I asked, feeling mindless for talking to a bird.
“Nevermore,” the bird replied, to my surprise. Even though I didn’t believe the bird, it made me angry to think that I would never be able to escape the troubling situation I was in.
“Isn’t it possible for me to get a little relief from this agonizing pain?” I screamed.
“Nevermore,” the dove replied, making my anger worse than before.
“Will I ever get to see my Caroline again? Will I get to see her in heaven?” I asked, obviously not ready to hear the answer.
“Nevermore,” the dove replied, making my spirits sink even lower. Trying to make myself feel better, I came up with the idea that it had been taught how to say that. It didn’t know what it was saying. How could it understand any of what it was telling me? I felt like I was going insane.
I got angry and decided I didn’t want that bird anywhere near me anymore. All it did was cause problems, and I wanted it gone.
“Get out! Go! Shoo! Go away! I want you gone!” I screamed at the dove, but It didn’t move an inch.
“I said get out!” I screamed.
“Nevermore!” screeched the dove. I gave up at this point. There was no use. I was destined to be alone forever, so why not have a little

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    … I am making a collection of birds myself. I have been at it ever since I was a boy.(136)” When Sylvia brings the bird hunter into her home, the hunter looks at Sylvia “ with the hope of discovering that the rare bird was one of her acquaintances.(136)” But after Sylvia quickly realizes that…

    • 203 Words
    • 1 Page
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Edna Vale Monologue

    • 418 Words
    • 2 Pages

    she said. I could hear voices inside the room. “Why don’t you come in; we’d love to hear from you,” she said. I entered. There was a bittersweet incense smell and soft unidentifiable music.…

    • 418 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    He said some nonsense about reading the books. I slumped to the floor, not wanting to believe this was happening to ME. He spoke more nonsense as I thought about the things we might lose. At that time, the door voice called to me. I was sure it was over, but the person at the front door went away.…

    • 659 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    My room was dark, like a dark hole. I wasn’t sure about opening the closet. I was thrilled to know what was behind, but scared about finding something I might regret. I put my hand on the doorknob and slowly opened it. The closet door made a worse sound than the one that was coming from it.…

    • 328 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    She started experiencing terrifying thoughts, nightmares and finding herself being paranoid whenever alone. Being a Psychiatrist, Caroline noticed herself become depressed as she believed she failed at her job for not being able to take her own advice. In the continuing months she began to experience symptoms of schizophrenia. At times she would go through strange hallucinations leaving in a state of delusion soon after. Unknown to her was also the unusual motor behavior of her brain. Once Caroline began to understand what all this meant she hides it from her husband, deciding she can fix it herself. Sadly it became worse, yet Caroline reused to acknowledge it. But the voices were unrelenting; she needed to keep them away so she got her prescribed drugs in secret. The treatment was slowly working; she thought it would all be okay. Until one night, Caroline and Emmett had been invited to dinner with the head neurosurgeon, a colleague of Emmett’s; it was running smoothly until voices came to light. Caroline wanted to scream and cry but to her this was too important, she fought against the merciless voices; acting as if she wasn’t being swallowed by the darkness. The voices ripped down the shields of her mind crushing her. They told her she didn’t…

    • 1784 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    “Charles, Veronica, where are you?” my voice was hoarse and dry. Then I heard sounds in the cabin…

    • 1382 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    He came home and realized I hadn’t gotten rid of the bird and went ballistic. He dropped his things and by the time I realized what he was going for it was too late. He killed it, he killed my last bit of happiness! I was tired of it, and I had a…

    • 680 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Zachary Alternate Ending

    • 704 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Zach whispered lowly, drenching himself in the realization. The broken-down door to the house swung open with a woman appearing in the entry way. The woman was young looking, but very tired. A white cotton dress draped her frail, willowy…

    • 704 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Beep Jackie Monologue

    • 1549 Words
    • 7 Pages

    In front of me, a woman and man stood over me, two strangers awaiting my response. “Jackelyn? Jackie? Can you hear us?” I heard from soft voice to my right.…

    • 1549 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Annabeth. Annabeth was moving into a small, little cottage in the woods.…

    • 383 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The Red River Monologue

    • 1276 Words
    • 6 Pages

    I hear voices. I get excited because in that moment I knew I was not alone. I followed the trail of the sounds quickly yet quietly until I found the source. Down the shared alley, there was a big commotion. The most familiar voice I heard, was my mother’s.…

    • 1276 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    The Raven Tpcastt

    • 943 Words
    • 4 Pages

    The bird will for sure leave tomorrow, as everything else does. But the bird responded with “nevermore.”…

    • 943 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Bill of Rights Poem

    • 301 Words
    • 2 Pages

    She’s there to protect you, she’s an innocent little bird, lets call her a dove,…

    • 301 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Look girl! There’s a Bird! The bird watcher 2 Let’s go see! (They look so happy to see a bird, They runs off stage to get closer to the bird) Claire Please don’t run into us…

    • 748 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    I don’t think I can ever visit him. But sometimes I think about writing him a letter. I don’t imagine anyone else is going to.” - page 73 But she still had that small hole in her heart that only he could fill.…

    • 818 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays

Related Topics