Causes Essay
Ling Peng, Xiaolu Fan
Bahareh Gharehgozlou
College Writing Eng 11011-066
3-9-2015
Air Pollution
Thesis Statement:
Air pollution is caused by the following factors: exhaust gases from cars, uncontrolled factory releases, and burning of low-quality coal for heating, also air pollution will affect people health and environment.
Causes:
A. Exhaust gases from cars
Topic Sentence: Because of there is not enough control from government, there are more gases from cars in recent years.
1. Government does not have enough control
2. Citizens are not conscientious
B. Uncontrolled factory releases
Topic Sentence: There is no standard for gases release from factory, it make air getting worse.
1. No regular checks on gases released
2. Factories are inside the borders of residential areas
C. Burning of low-quality coal for heating
Topic Sentence: There are some failure coal that burning in our country, this is bad for entire environment.
1. No governmental control
2. Other forms of energy too expensive
Effects:
A. People health problems
Topic Sentence: People inhale too much Carbon dioxide is bad for their health.
1. Will make people get cancer
2. Automobile contains Carbon monoxide which enables atheroma
B. Environmental problems
Topic Sentence: Air pollution is bad for environment, in terms of global warming and acid rain.
1. Global warming
2. Acid rain
C. Plant damaged *
Concluding Sentence:
Exhaust gases from cars, uncontrolled factory releases and burning of low-quality coal for heating are reasons that cause air pollution, also air pollution will affect people health and environment.
Bahareh Gharehgozlou
College Writing Eng 11011-066
3-9-2015
Air Pollution
Thesis Statement:
Air pollution is caused by the following factors: exhaust gases from cars, uncontrolled factory releases, and burning of low-quality coal for heating, also air pollution will affect people health and environment.
Causes:
A. Exhaust gases from cars
Topic Sentence: Because of there is not enough control from government, there are more gases from cars in recent years.
1. Government does not have enough control
2. Citizens are not conscientious
B. Uncontrolled factory releases
Topic Sentence: There is no standard for gases release from factory, it make air getting worse.
1. No regular checks on gases released
2. Factories are inside the borders of residential areas
C. Burning of low-quality coal for heating
Topic Sentence: There are some failure coal that burning in our country, this is bad for entire environment.
1. No governmental control
2. Other forms of energy too expensive
Effects:
A. People health problems
Topic Sentence: People inhale too much Carbon dioxide is bad for their health.
1. Will make people get cancer
2. Automobile contains Carbon monoxide which enables atheroma
B. Environmental problems
Topic Sentence: Air pollution is bad for environment, in terms of global warming and acid rain.
1. Global warming
2. Acid rain
C. Plant damaged *
Concluding Sentence:
Exhaust gases from cars, uncontrolled factory releases and burning of low-quality coal for heating are reasons that cause air pollution, also air pollution will affect people health and environment.