censorship in north korea

Would you live in a place where there is no worldwide internet, no phones, or where none of any kind of your usual advertisements do not exist?(rhet) Well, in North Korea, millions live without knowing what it is like to live your kind of life where media is usually freely distributed and absorbed everywhere. The North Korean citizens are constantly being malnourished of information with the exception of the government's propaganda. To clarify, the North Korean regime's extreme media censorship should be suspended allowing the citizens free access to all kinds of media.
To begin with, the North Korean government's extreme censorship of media is corrupt, since it can help increase influence over the public and control over the dictatorship of the country. How? The North Korean government censors media that does not have anything to do or anything that challenges against their communistic judgement, main focus of suppressing one's idea to strengthen control. Adding to that, the country rarely allows foreign visits inside the border fearing that their citizens' views and opinions for the party will alter, with many people questioning the government's authority. In North Korea, a huge percent of the media is made and distributed by the government, including TV channels by the government, radio stations by the government, their own computer operating system by the government, and even the internet is supplied by the government.(repetition) People's rights and freedom can be upheld if only the North Korean Government suspend their rights to extreme censorship of media. Do you really think their censorship of media is acceptable?(rhet)
Secondly, the North Korean government's extreme censorship of media should be suspended as it may lead to an oppressed and uneducated society limiting creativity and entertainment. Media, making life more rich with ideas and creativity. Media educates us in every aspect. Censoring huge amounts of media can drastically alter the people