"And she said maybe they got no rite to make me smart because if god wanted me to be smart he would have made me born that way." p. 16 If I could rewrite this part of the story I would add why he stands so strongly about his decision. Having a little background about the situation will give the reader a better and clearer understanding of why things are happening.
Ask Questions
"The more intelligent you become the more problems you'll have, Charlie.'" p. 47
How far would he go to hold onto a dream of becoming intelligent?
Revise You Reading
"'You're fooling yourself, Rose It's not fair to us or to him Pretending he's normal Driving him as if he were an animal that could learn to do tricks.'" p. 73 At first I thought his parents loved their son, just as you would assume any other parent would love their child, but now I think that Charlie’s mom is the one trying to step away from Charlie and erase him from her life. I believe that no child should have this kind of association with their parent. And by treating Charlie in this particular way, I see many troubles and worries that he may run into.
Comment on the Text
121920040767000"I'm like a man who's been half-asleep all his life, trying to find out what he was like before he woke up." p. 82
I like the words in this quote because it shows me reality isn’t as sweet as we may think. Realizing that life is just a mess is when we can truly enjoy the little things in life.
Evaluate
1162050121792900"How can I make him understand that he did not create me? He makes the same mistake as others when they look at a feeble-minded person and laugh because they don't understand there are human feelings involved He doesn't realize that I was a person before I came here." p. 145
The part I like best about this section is that Charlie doesn’t just settle for the things that he is given. He goes above and beyond to make his point across everyone’s minds. He always shows great determination