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College Admissions Essay: Underprivileged My Life
It is often in tenebrous night skies that we so lucidly glimpse the brightest stars. Having the opportunity to be a dazzling star in the pitch-black orphanage of SOS children’s village, was a modest, euphoric and memorable experience. For as a candle, I lose nothing by lighting other candles but only increase the light circles of hope. Raised up in an Indian household that values generosity to the underprivileged, I grew up with a burning desire to sympathize with others. At a young age, I would donate my old text books and clothes to the orphanage, but I wanted to contribute so much more. The children in the orphanage lived in overcrowded homes in groups of 7 or 8 with a caretakers. Being scholastically astute with maths and physics, I decided

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