Commemorative Speech Outline
Attention Grabber: Have you ever grown up in the city and then your family moves to the suburbs and there’s just a little bit of you that wants to move back into the city because you don’t have to walk far to do stuff?
Thesis: Today I’d like for you to know more about me. Body Main Point: Where was everyone in my family born and raised.
A. I was born in 1996 and raised in Blackwell located in the Southside Richmond.
B. My older brother, Doug was born in 1991 and raised in Whitcomb Court located in the Northside of Richmond.
C. My oldest brother, Javon was born in 1986 and raised in the Carver Community located near the Northside of Richmond.
D. My mother, Patricia was born and raised in the Carver Community located near the Northside of Richmond.
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My father, Kevin was born and raised in Holland Park, located near the Northside of Richmond.
F. My youngest pit bull, Trigga was born in 2009 and raised in Chesterfield.
G. My oldest pit bull, Imani was born in 2004 and raised in Chesterfield.
Main Point: My hobbies that I enjoy doing.
A. I am a photographer and I just got into it 2 years ago and my strength is landscape photography.
B. I run for distances 8 – 12 miles in the city and sometime around my neighborhood, but those are normally 3 miles long. I ran in 2 5k’s, 1 8k, and I’m going to be completing my first half marathon in November.
C. I also play tennis. I started playing tennis my senior year of high school. I don’t play for college or any local teams, but I play with my friends very frequently.
Main Point: My education & career current and future plans.
A. I’m attending John Tyler Community College to get my associates in Business Administration.
B. I plan to transfer to VCU to major in Information Systems and become a System Engineer.
C. I currently have a job at RRHA (Richmond Redevelopment & Housing Authority) working as a Desktop and Server Technician for the past 6 years. I’ve learned a lot and developed a lot of useful
skills. Conclusion
Summary of speech thesis: I’m sure you’d like to know more about me, but that’s pretty much it.
Closing Material: Some day I will return to where I was born and raised maybe not exactly the place, but to the City of Richmond. The place where if I am craving cookies at 2 AM I can skate a few
Thesis: Today I’d like for you to know more about me. Body Main Point: Where was everyone in my family born and raised.
A. I was born in 1996 and raised in Blackwell located in the Southside Richmond.
B. My older brother, Doug was born in 1991 and raised in Whitcomb Court located in the Northside of Richmond.
C. My oldest brother, Javon was born in 1986 and raised in the Carver Community located near the Northside of Richmond.
D. My mother, Patricia was born and raised in the Carver Community located near the Northside of Richmond.
E. …show more content…
My father, Kevin was born and raised in Holland Park, located near the Northside of Richmond.
F. My youngest pit bull, Trigga was born in 2009 and raised in Chesterfield.
G. My oldest pit bull, Imani was born in 2004 and raised in Chesterfield.
Main Point: My hobbies that I enjoy doing.
A. I am a photographer and I just got into it 2 years ago and my strength is landscape photography.
B. I run for distances 8 – 12 miles in the city and sometime around my neighborhood, but those are normally 3 miles long. I ran in 2 5k’s, 1 8k, and I’m going to be completing my first half marathon in November.
C. I also play tennis. I started playing tennis my senior year of high school. I don’t play for college or any local teams, but I play with my friends very frequently.
Main Point: My education & career current and future plans.
A. I’m attending John Tyler Community College to get my associates in Business Administration.
B. I plan to transfer to VCU to major in Information Systems and become a System Engineer.
C. I currently have a job at RRHA (Richmond Redevelopment & Housing Authority) working as a Desktop and Server Technician for the past 6 years. I’ve learned a lot and developed a lot of useful
skills. Conclusion
Summary of speech thesis: I’m sure you’d like to know more about me, but that’s pretty much it.
Closing Material: Some day I will return to where I was born and raised maybe not exactly the place, but to the City of Richmond. The place where if I am craving cookies at 2 AM I can skate a few