Composition: Copula and Sentence Structure
Janine Arielle H. Felix
BADPR I – 3D
COMPOSITION
UNITY
DEVELOPMENT
AUDIENCE
TONE
Fishing is a great sport for many reasons. Dodgeball is not so realaxing because one big jerk is hurling stuff in your head! Also ,Fishing is something almost anybody can do. When you see a fishing show on TV, most of the waiting has been edited out. A yarn strike indicator is better for tracking fish through mild currents. If you are going to be fishing all day, be sure to bring a book and something to drink.
ANALYSIS:
Unity:
Topic Sentence: Fishing is a great sport for many reason.
Subject: Fishing
Controlling Idea: great sport
Supporting Details: 1.) Dodgeball is not so realaxing because one big jerk is hurling stuff in your head 2.) Fishing is something almost anybody can do. Whe you see a fishing show on TV, most of the waiting has been edited out 3.) A yarn strike indicator is better for tracking fish through mild currents
Clinching Sentence: Underined (Conclusion)
Coherence
Paragraph order: Logical
Stuctural Devices: not so, because,almost,most, through
Composition: Unity
Unity in a paragraph or essay means all the sentences should be about the same topic. A paragraph about your kitchen, therefore, would probably not include a sentence about the boxes in your attic. Paragraphs or essays without strong unity can sometimes be confusing or hard to read. By referring back to the topic sentence, you can see whether your sentence belongs or not.
Composition: Audience
All writing has an intended audience. Just as you probably wouldn't speak to your boss the same way you might speak to your brother, you wouldn't use the same language in your writing for one person or group that you might use for another. It is important that your writing always reflects the audience you have in mind. For example, if you are writing to someone who is unfamiliar with auto mechanics, you
BADPR I – 3D
COMPOSITION
UNITY
DEVELOPMENT
AUDIENCE
TONE
Fishing is a great sport for many reasons. Dodgeball is not so realaxing because one big jerk is hurling stuff in your head! Also ,Fishing is something almost anybody can do. When you see a fishing show on TV, most of the waiting has been edited out. A yarn strike indicator is better for tracking fish through mild currents. If you are going to be fishing all day, be sure to bring a book and something to drink.
ANALYSIS:
Unity:
Topic Sentence: Fishing is a great sport for many reason.
Subject: Fishing
Controlling Idea: great sport
Supporting Details: 1.) Dodgeball is not so realaxing because one big jerk is hurling stuff in your head 2.) Fishing is something almost anybody can do. Whe you see a fishing show on TV, most of the waiting has been edited out 3.) A yarn strike indicator is better for tracking fish through mild currents
Clinching Sentence: Underined (Conclusion)
Coherence
Paragraph order: Logical
Stuctural Devices: not so, because,almost,most, through
Composition: Unity
Unity in a paragraph or essay means all the sentences should be about the same topic. A paragraph about your kitchen, therefore, would probably not include a sentence about the boxes in your attic. Paragraphs or essays without strong unity can sometimes be confusing or hard to read. By referring back to the topic sentence, you can see whether your sentence belongs or not.
Composition: Audience
All writing has an intended audience. Just as you probably wouldn't speak to your boss the same way you might speak to your brother, you wouldn't use the same language in your writing for one person or group that you might use for another. It is important that your writing always reflects the audience you have in mind. For example, if you are writing to someone who is unfamiliar with auto mechanics, you