Creative Writing: Paxon's False Enemies
“What the heck is wrong with you? You need help,” Paxon exclaimed, “this isn’t the way you normally act. This isn’t the real you.”
DJ, Paxon, and McKenzie were walking around on their way to the gas station when they decided to go off the street toward the old abanded insane asylum. When they turned down the creepy, gloomy street they heard crows gawking and making normal crow sounds, but McKenzie kept hearing words from the crows and thought she was going crazy.
“Do you guys hear those crows?” McKenzie asked.
“No!” They both responded at the same time.
“You’re going crazy!” DJ cried. McKenzie tried to get the thought that the crows were in her head away. “Hey, Mckenzie you should just go home and get some rest Paxon commented.’’ “Why should …show more content…
She just wanted to listen to some slow jazz and eat pizza rolls. But it did not happen the way she wanted. First, she saw her dad jump off the couch. As he did that, he screamed, “I’m superman!!!!” He then fell onto the floor like a brick hitting the ground. McKenzie was surprised that her dad could jump that high and just went to her bed and fell asleep. But as soon as she closed her eyes, she started to have these dreams. She was freaking out so much, she didn’t even realize her mom ran into the room. McKenzie was sleeping, but at the same time she was awake and screaming her head off. When she realized what was happening, she had a thought about this abandoned insane asylum on the edge of town.
McKenzie tells her friends DJ and Paxon, so they agree to go to this asylum but, having second thoughts because of McKenzie’s “condition”.
“Hey, Paxon don’t you think this kinda weird that we are going to and asylum for insane people and McKenzie is acting that way.” DJ asked
“Yeah man this stuff is totally messed up, I think she is, you know, bonkers man.” Paxon commented.”
“Why should you worry?” McKenzie replied. “I was just
DJ, Paxon, and McKenzie were walking around on their way to the gas station when they decided to go off the street toward the old abanded insane asylum. When they turned down the creepy, gloomy street they heard crows gawking and making normal crow sounds, but McKenzie kept hearing words from the crows and thought she was going crazy.
“Do you guys hear those crows?” McKenzie asked.
“No!” They both responded at the same time.
“You’re going crazy!” DJ cried. McKenzie tried to get the thought that the crows were in her head away. “Hey, Mckenzie you should just go home and get some rest Paxon commented.’’ “Why should …show more content…
She just wanted to listen to some slow jazz and eat pizza rolls. But it did not happen the way she wanted. First, she saw her dad jump off the couch. As he did that, he screamed, “I’m superman!!!!” He then fell onto the floor like a brick hitting the ground. McKenzie was surprised that her dad could jump that high and just went to her bed and fell asleep. But as soon as she closed her eyes, she started to have these dreams. She was freaking out so much, she didn’t even realize her mom ran into the room. McKenzie was sleeping, but at the same time she was awake and screaming her head off. When she realized what was happening, she had a thought about this abandoned insane asylum on the edge of town.
McKenzie tells her friends DJ and Paxon, so they agree to go to this asylum but, having second thoughts because of McKenzie’s “condition”.
“Hey, Paxon don’t you think this kinda weird that we are going to and asylum for insane people and McKenzie is acting that way.” DJ asked
“Yeah man this stuff is totally messed up, I think she is, you know, bonkers man.” Paxon commented.”
“Why should you worry?” McKenzie replied. “I was just