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Creative Writing: Reid's Car Driving To Telluride
Before I know it I am in Reid’s car driving to Telluride. It is a two hour drive and it gets more unbearable by the minute. I can't get out of my own head. I keep thinking about what he did and why he did it and if it was even real. Then he says something I wasn't expecting at all.
“How is your brother doing?” he says with concern.
“Liam? I haven't talked or seen him in a while. I have kind of been out of it lately.”
“ I visited him the other day. I thought he might like some company so I brought him lunch.” And there it is, the sweet, kind Reid I have always known and loved.
“You did? How was he?”
“Quiet but that's normal. He says he really misses you. The jail time has really taken a toll on him.” My brother had always been a good kid, he just got thrown into the wrong crowd. I know they probably had him do way worse stuff than start a fire, but I never asked what. As we continue driving, snow falls softly on the roads and on the windshield. In fifteen minutes the roads are slick and I am getting nervous. It brings back awful memories of when I was in a wreck because my car fishtailed. My car flipped and the police officers said I was lucky to be alive. Reid hits a bump in the road and loses control of the car and skids all over the road. He pumps the breaks and luckily pulls it over to the side of the road.
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He knew how scary my previous wreck was and he must feel so bad. I am so scared that I don't even care about the Dareon drama (at least for now.)
“I am so sorry! This was supposed to be a relaxing trip and all it did was bring back bad memories!” He kisses the top of my head and then without thinking he kisses my cheek and his face turns redder than a


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