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Dave Falls Diary Entry
Emma has just moved to Willow Falls, a town in the South that holds a history she doesn’t know about. Well, a history she doesn’t know about until she starts getting she starts getting flashbacks of what once happened there. Between the visions and finding her true identity, she meets Drake, a handsome but mysterious man who also has been showing up in her dreams. Emma can’t help but notice the attraction between the two, but will she be able to fine the meaning of everything before it’s too late?

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I didn’t know that homeroom could change a life. Actually, it pretty much seemed impossible. Not that i thought about it. But back then, things were different. I was different. I’ve always been sensitive to the world around me. Every now and thing I would know things before they happen. Other times I would see glimpses of what had happened in a certain area long ago. But when i came to Willow Falls, I didn’t expect to happen what happened. I didn’t have any idea. And now, today, i sit at the bottom of the big Willow tree that played part in the drastic change of my life. I decided to write this all down on paper, to try to make it seem a little but more real. Not that it would help any. …show more content…
Chapter 1:
August 18th,
Dear Diary,
I had the dream again tonight. It was the same one as last night. Except this time I got a glimpse of the man’s eyes when we got close.They were gray, like nothing. It was as if he was empty inside. That was the only thing i could capture before somebody put a hand over my mouth and took me away. I still have that voice stuck in my head saying, “It won’t hurt.”.

I have a feeling that this dream won’t end soon either. I think it will keep replaying when I sleep. I don’t know why I’m having it. Ever since I moved to Willow Falls I’ve felt strange. I don’t know what it is, and these days I feel like I don’t know anything.

Emma
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