Description Place Essay
Tyler Wilson
Professor Kabaji
Freshman Composition
Description of A Place
27 June 2015
Essay Preliminary Work
Please answer the following questions before typing your essay:
1. What topic did you choose from the homework section? A supermarket/local park/barber/salon
2. What is the thesis statement of this essay? With every visit, I am guaranteed to find kids enjoying the well-built outdoor play area, families feeding the ducks and geese, retired men relaxing in the shade with their fishing rods, and a unique and dangerous attribute only found here.
3. What are the three topic sentences?
My favorite parking lot is the one directly adjacent to the playground.
As Leland and I huff our way up the hill, we are able to overlook over the rest of the park.
This bridge leads to what the locals call “Geese Island”, someone even managed to carve the name into the last plank.
4. In what order is this essay developed? Geographically.
5. What is the point of view used in this essay? First person
Great Things Come In Small Packages
Tricity Park is a city park located on the boarder of Placentia and Brea. My two year old son, Leland, and I try to go to the park every Friday to get our daily dose of vitamin D and to burn off some energy before nap time. The main entrance is marked with a sign with the words “Tricity Park” burned into the wood planks. A fork in the road forces a decision, go left to the playground or right a secluded parking lot; I always turn left. In the center of the park is a big lake, asphalt paths loop around it connecting the small crowded parking lots. With every visit, I am guaranteed to find kids enjoying the well-built outdoor play area, families feeding the ducks and geese, retired men relaxing in the shade with their fishing rods, and a unique and dangerous attribute only found here. Tricity is a fantastic place to spend the day outdoors without driving too far.
My favorite parking lot is the one directly adjacent to the playground. Cars lucky
Professor Kabaji
Freshman Composition
Description of A Place
27 June 2015
Essay Preliminary Work
Please answer the following questions before typing your essay:
1. What topic did you choose from the homework section? A supermarket/local park/barber/salon
2. What is the thesis statement of this essay? With every visit, I am guaranteed to find kids enjoying the well-built outdoor play area, families feeding the ducks and geese, retired men relaxing in the shade with their fishing rods, and a unique and dangerous attribute only found here.
3. What are the three topic sentences?
My favorite parking lot is the one directly adjacent to the playground.
As Leland and I huff our way up the hill, we are able to overlook over the rest of the park.
This bridge leads to what the locals call “Geese Island”, someone even managed to carve the name into the last plank.
4. In what order is this essay developed? Geographically.
5. What is the point of view used in this essay? First person
Great Things Come In Small Packages
Tricity Park is a city park located on the boarder of Placentia and Brea. My two year old son, Leland, and I try to go to the park every Friday to get our daily dose of vitamin D and to burn off some energy before nap time. The main entrance is marked with a sign with the words “Tricity Park” burned into the wood planks. A fork in the road forces a decision, go left to the playground or right a secluded parking lot; I always turn left. In the center of the park is a big lake, asphalt paths loop around it connecting the small crowded parking lots. With every visit, I am guaranteed to find kids enjoying the well-built outdoor play area, families feeding the ducks and geese, retired men relaxing in the shade with their fishing rods, and a unique and dangerous attribute only found here. Tricity is a fantastic place to spend the day outdoors without driving too far.
My favorite parking lot is the one directly adjacent to the playground. Cars lucky