Preview

Descriptive Writing, Park

Good Essays
Open Document
Open Document
454 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
Descriptive Writing, Park
The old trees bordering the fields acted like guards, muffling the sound of the busy city around them and creating a peaceful haven for the small creatures that lived inside. The only entrance was a narrow path that gradually widened as it ran through the field and up the hill. It was lined at either side with different types of tree; thin birches, broad maples and tall sycamores. Their long branches intertwined creating a golden canopy over the path. The only sound was the rustle of the leaves as birds fluttered among them, whistling merrily to each other.
Rays of light shone through the gaps in the crisp leaves, covering the floor in dappled sunlight. Occasionally a gentle wind blew through the branches causing sycamore seeds to spiral down onto to the carpet of leaves below. A young grey squirrel observed this for a while before scampering down the gnarled trunk. Cautiously it looked round before scurrying up the path. Once it reached the top of the hill it watched curiously as a familiar woman unlocked the door of the cafe, preparing for her long day of customers bustling in and out of her small shop. Suddenly the squirrel heard a child’s squeal and it hurried away.
Two excited children ran out of the squeaky playground gate and down the other side of the hill. The lady they were following trudged down the muddy path slowly, leaning on her walking stick for support. They raced ahead of her and were soon waiting at the water’s edge. “Hurry up!” one yelled impatiently. Nervously she tried to walk faster before one of the clumsy young boys toppled into the water. Finally she reached the bottom and drew some slices of bread wrapped in cling film from her handbag. Ducks were already rushing towards them, obviously hungry so early in the morning. The women watched enviously as the boys dashed round the pond trying to throw crumbs to every duck. With a sigh she looked down at her own stiff, wrinkled hands. However she found it hard to feel sorry for herself for

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Better Essays

    The pine tree in which Sylvia climbs in order to see the white heron up close can be represented as a symbol of life. "Now she thought of the tree with a new excitement, for why, if one climbed it at break of day, could not one see all the world, and easily…

    • 1413 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Good Essays

    Always a hunter, his eyes were tuned to recognize distant motion. The snow hadn’t reached town yet, and the boughs and needles remained clear and lush. The deep and varying greens of the wall of pine was stark against the blue of the midafternoon sky. There wasn’t a single cloud. It was a beautiful, blue bird day.…

    • 1004 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    1." The shadow of a tree fell abruptly across the dew and ghostly birds began to sing among the blue leaves." (Page 159)…

    • 750 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Maxine Hong Birdsong Essay

    • 1994 Words
    • 8 Pages

    I take a walk in Wissahickon Park after dropping my twins at their school. The trails are muddy from heavy rains and temporary streams have formed along my path. (I have an hour before I need to open my laptop and get to work on my day job; not all poets do whatever they like.) The fuscia flowers of the redbud tree are brilliant against the green of early leafing shrubs. Birdsong is all around me. I note some of the birds--if they are bright enough and close enough to the trail or I recognize their song. A few chipmunks scurry among the leaves on the forest floor. A cardinal lights on a branch nearby, a red flash. A robin lands on the trail ahead, scraping his yellow beak against a rock.…

    • 1994 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air. In the street below a peddler was crying his wares. The notes of a distant song which some one was singing reached her faintly, and countless sparrows were twittering in the eaves. (537)…

    • 1928 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Good Essays

    It was an oddly quiet Sunday morning in the middle of December. Clear skies, forests and beautiful snow-capped mountains dominated the views from my front porch. The temperature was mild, one of those days you could wear a thin sweater and be a little chilly. There were no birds chirping or butterflies fluttering, as they had all left to the south to find a more suitable environment for them or died. I had missed this type of day when you could relax in the peacefulness of the quiet morning…

    • 424 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Sharp edged shadows stalked across the distant slopes and valleys as the sun began to rise higher. The light was bright but unnatural, thin and brittle, like before a storm. Paul was watching a hawk spiral overhead on the morning's first thermals when a furtive movement from below snatched his attention. He lowered his gaze to where a grove of stunted bushes below rustled and move jerkily against the wind.…

    • 1066 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Descriptive writing

    • 268 Words
    • 2 Pages

    Rocketing across the water, the beach and sky blur into one. But in my mind everything is still, even calm in fact. My eyes dart around. I see men. Pain and panic fill their eyes. Some tremble as if catching a fever. Other soldiers clutch on to their weapons as if gripping onto their mother’s hand when learning how to walk. Some soldiers drink from their canteens, as if it’s the last drink to enter their bodies. I feel my heart race, blood pump through my veins. The Captain yells, “30 seconds! Good luck, men. May God be with you and I’ll see you on the beach!”…

    • 268 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    5 Senses Essay

    • 743 Words
    • 3 Pages

    The birds were still chirping and chattering as the wind blew through the leaves on the tree. The ground was extremely barren and rugged except for one lonely tree. There were corpses scattered and spread all over the ground, it looked like the bodies were etched into the soil. There were blood thirsty vultures feeding on the remains of some of them. This gave me an awful chill up my spine. At least none of the corpses there were ours, we had buried them already. The day had just begun but I knew it was going to be another long and tough one.…

    • 743 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Park Descriptive Writing

    • 839 Words
    • 4 Pages

    All it took for reality to become meaningless. As I lay here, I can taste blood in my mouth: hot, wet and metallic. I can feel the forever expanding pool or crimson blood cascading from my partially severed body. My nostrils are filled with the smell of gnarled fabric and the acrid scent of roasting rubber. Silence. It drowns me, it pulls and tugs and screams a thousand words never to be heard. Nothingness.…

    • 839 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    The sun shone down brightly as Tyler and Zoe pulled into the parking lot. Its bright rays reflected by the white snow covering the trees around them. The sound of their doors opening and closing scared the few birds left in the forest. Their speedy escape shook the tree limbs. Their rustling mixed with the flapping of wings created a torrent of sound in this peaceful place.…

    • 2129 Words
    • 9 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    Descriptive Writing

    • 1007 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Descriptive Writing: To Write A Short Descriptive Piece About War Experiences Of A WWI Soldier.…

    • 1007 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Good Essays

    As I stepped outside my porch, like any other day, to attend my morning quite-time. This day wasn’t just like others. I was so peaceful and quite. I saw the sun’s rays in my eye, lighting my way step by step. It shined so bright, it burned my eye. I saw the beautiful green trees up across the sky, with birds flying over them and other just waiting to sing…

    • 362 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Descriptive Essay

    • 424 Words
    • 2 Pages

    Love at first sight is a hopeless romantic’s dream. Do I believe in it? Fifty eight percent of Americans do according to vanityfair.com. Even still I’m torn on the issue. Love is hard to define but to strip it down to one exact moment in time adds another complication to the already complicated matter. Is it possible that within a blink of an eye you can experience love? That question makes me think back to a party I attended.…

    • 424 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    Descriptive essay

    • 441 Words
    • 2 Pages

    I turn the key and hear the old engine turn over a few times, struggling to get going. Eventually it starts. The engine sounds rough when cold, but with a few quick revs, it starts to sound a little better. The “check” light flashes at me until I press the brake pedal to let the car test the brake lights, or press the “check” button on the roof near the sunroof adjustment switch, between the two visors. When I press the “check” button, seven small, red, LED lights brighten to show me that they are functioning properly. They are there to warn me of low oil, or low coolant, or to let me know if any brake lights, taillights, or headlights are not working. Clicking the sunroof button reclines the glass above my head. The sun beams into the interior and heats the leather.…

    • 441 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays