INTRODUCTION
Attention getter
General statement
Thesis statement
Due to this positive environment, staying in hostel can ensure students’ academic excellence.
PROs
Hostels provide the best atmosphere for study. If students enjoy the hostel life in different ways, they also work very hard when the time comes for it.
BODY 1
Topic sentence
Firstly, Friends
Supporting detail 1
Group discussion
Supporting detail 2
Moreover, Competitive
Supporting detail 3
Senior
Concluding sentence
BODY 2
Topic sentence
Organized schedule
Supporting detail 1
Time management skills
Supporting detail 2
Others, try to make it consistent
Supporting detail 3
Avoid from studying last minute
Concluding sentence
BODY 3
Topic sentence
Facilities
Supporting detail 1
Study room
Supporting detail 2
Wi-Fi
Supporting detail 3
Concluding sentence
CON
BODY 4
Con 1
Far from family
Refute 1
Parents can visit
Con 2
Study all the time
Refute 2
Play time
Con 3
Financial support
Refute 3 scholarship CONCLUSION
Summary of main ideas (topic sentences)
Restate thesis statement
HOME LIFE AND HOSTEL LIFE - HOME LIFE BETTER THAN HOSTEL LIFE
Marks came home during the Autumn Break for about a week, and met his friends whom he had not been able to meet during the last 2-3 months, as he was staying in the hostel. He was daily surrounded by them, as they were also equally keen to learn from him about his new experiences at the college as well as the playground.
One day one of his friends expressed a wish to be in a hostel, whereupon Marks had to remark that he was not right, in wishing for the hostel life and that their home life was far better than the hostel life. He had various points in support of his belief. These are some of the important arguments put forward by him.
Early in the morning, when one gets up from the bed, one finds