Problem and Solution Essay Outline
Tentative Title: The Problem of Lack of Professional Doctors in Kazakhstan can be solved I. Introduction
Thesis statement: Due to the lack of professional doctors in Kazakhstan, Kazakhstani government should solve the problem by preparing well-educated medical students, providing medical centers with modern equipment and increasing doctors’ salary.
II. Background of Problem • What is a problem –The lack of professional doctors; • Symptoms/signs of the problem – A part of population suffers from various diseases, doctors refuse to do difficult operations; • Who is affected? – Kazakhstani population; • Where did it begin, or where is it most problematic? – In Kazakhstan; • When did it become such a problem? – After Independence, in 1991; • What are the reasons or causes of the problem? - Lack of educated doctors, low salary and old technology; • What are the consequences of the problem? - Illnesses among people increase, the growth of the population may decrease;
III. Solution One
The first solution for this problem is Kazakhstani government should prepare well-
educated medical students.
A. Strengths:
1) Students may become good specialists and find a job easily.
B. Weaknesses:
1) Well-educated students may refuse to go to the villages as volunteers.
2) Students may want to live and work in other more-developed countries.
IV. Solution Two
Secondly, government can solve this problem by providing medical centers with modern
equipment.
A. Strengths:
The Lack of 3 1) The doctors’ work may become better. B. Weaknesses:
1) It would cost too much money.
V. Solution Three
One final suggestion, which would help enormously, is increasing the doctors’ salary.
A. Strengths:
1) Doctors will work hard. 2) Most of school graduates may choose the doctors profession. 3) The corruption in hospitals may
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