Direct Characterization Mr Sprinkles

Once upon a time (1: cliche) there was a majestic unicorn, his name was Mr. Sprinkles. He had once lived in the spectacular everfree forest. It was a beautiful place filled with thousands of vibrant flowers, a glimmering waterfall, and wide array of enchanting animals (2: Imagery). Mr. Sprinkles grew up playing with all the other unicorns. They were a fun-loving group of friends that were always frolicking in the fields together (3: Alliteration). As he matured and got older, he eventually realized that he was gay. He decided to trust his friends because he thought he could trust them with his secret, but he was so very wrong. His friends laughed at him and said, “A unicorn being gay is crazier that a fish trying to fly!” (4: Metaphor). Feeling
Sprinkles had another vision-like dream. This time, he was on top of the mountain where the waterfall began. He saw the same Alicorn as from his other dream. Just as he was about to walk over to the majestic white alicorn with a flowing purple mane, he was given a rude awakening. It was Lila pestering him to wake up because she was hungry and Mr. Sprinkles always uses his magic to give her nuts to eat. As they were enjoying their Breakfast, Mr. Sprinkles started telling Lila about his dream, “that dream felt like reality. (8: analogy)” he was explaining. After he told her everything, it felt as is the wind was whispering to them (9: personification) they thought it was telling them to climb to the top of the mountain. They weren't sure if they should or not, “Well, I mean what've we got to lose?(10: rhetorical question) I mean it's not like we have anything better to do” Lila pointed out. Mr. Sprinkles agreed and they set off on their journey to the top of the cliff where the waterfall
He had finally arrived at the top of the mountain, it was a flat pasture fill with green grass and a calm river flowing with water. He walked over to the edge of the waterfall and gazed off into the distance. After a few minutes, he remembered why he had climbed up there in the first place. He walked around looking for the mysterious alicorn from his dreams. All of the sudden, he heard a swooping noise coming from above him. He looked up and saw the mysterious alicorn coming down from the clouds that were floating above him. The mysterious started to speak, “I’ve been waiting for you” He stated. Mr. Sprinkles had no idea how to respond to him, he just stood there staring at him. “I see you got my message” he announced. At first, Mr. Sprinkles was confused but as he started to think about at and looked at the mysterious alicorn, he had realized that the mysterious alicorn was the same one as from his dreams, and he also figured out that the mysterious alicorn, whose name he had figured out was Star Bright, has used his alicorn magic to lead him there, “That was you, wasn’t it?” Mr. Sprinkles asked, “Yes sprinkles, that was me who appeared in your dreams.” Star Bright answered, “Wait, how do you know my name?” Sprinkles wondered, “You see Sprinkles, our fates are intertwined. We are destined to be together.” Star Bright replied, “I love you Sprinkles” he added,