Discussive essay Teenagers should not change their appearance by making plastic surgery.
Student’s name: Berdybayeva Nazira
ID: 20131676
Essay Outline
Topic: Teenagers should not change their appearance by making plastic surgery.
Why teenagers should not go under the knife to change something that is already perfect?
Introduction:
What is a plastic surgery?
Three reasons why teenagers willing to do plastic surgery? (Some Background information, stories)
a) Low Self-esteem
b) Cruel opinion of society
c) Influence of mass media, magazines
Thesis statement: Although plastic surgery may make teens love their reflection in the mirror, it also a very serious threat to patient’s health.
Main body
1. Argument: Any interventions in the human body, especially young body leads to health problems.
a) High Risks of Cosmetic surgery (physical health)
b) Most adolescents are not finished to physically, mentally grow up yet
c) Addiction, depression (psychical heal)
2. Argument: Making plastic surgery is a serious act, after it will be impossible to turn back.
d) People not always satisfied with result
e) It will not improve self-esteem
f) South Korea- country of beautiful clones
g) Every person is unique. (Natural beauty)
3. Counter argument: On the other hand teens are already mature, so they can consider and make decision by themselves.
1. Teen who has defects after injuring from accidence.
2. Physical birth defects like cleft lips and ear deformities.
Conclusion
Do you know that in South Korea most popular gift for teenagers age 12 – 18 is a cosmetic surgery? Nowadays making plastic surgery for teenagers became a normal, routine procedure in most developed countries such as U.S.A., South Korea and China. Why teenagers willing to do a plastic surgery? There are many reasons, the main are: low self-esteem, changing of beauty concept and influence of society. Low self-esteem a spread problem of thousand teenagers, usually because of dislike their own appearance. Most of teens
ID: 20131676
Essay Outline
Topic: Teenagers should not change their appearance by making plastic surgery.
Why teenagers should not go under the knife to change something that is already perfect?
Introduction:
What is a plastic surgery?
Three reasons why teenagers willing to do plastic surgery? (Some Background information, stories)
a) Low Self-esteem
b) Cruel opinion of society
c) Influence of mass media, magazines
Thesis statement: Although plastic surgery may make teens love their reflection in the mirror, it also a very serious threat to patient’s health.
Main body
1. Argument: Any interventions in the human body, especially young body leads to health problems.
a) High Risks of Cosmetic surgery (physical health)
b) Most adolescents are not finished to physically, mentally grow up yet
c) Addiction, depression (psychical heal)
2. Argument: Making plastic surgery is a serious act, after it will be impossible to turn back.
d) People not always satisfied with result
e) It will not improve self-esteem
f) South Korea- country of beautiful clones
g) Every person is unique. (Natural beauty)
3. Counter argument: On the other hand teens are already mature, so they can consider and make decision by themselves.
1. Teen who has defects after injuring from accidence.
2. Physical birth defects like cleft lips and ear deformities.
Conclusion
Do you know that in South Korea most popular gift for teenagers age 12 – 18 is a cosmetic surgery? Nowadays making plastic surgery for teenagers became a normal, routine procedure in most developed countries such as U.S.A., South Korea and China. Why teenagers willing to do a plastic surgery? There are many reasons, the main are: low self-esteem, changing of beauty concept and influence of society. Low self-esteem a spread problem of thousand teenagers, usually because of dislike their own appearance. Most of teens