Kluger use an analogy, comparing cows to human beings, (Para 1, 2, 3) in hopes of keeping his arguments relatable. However, his analogy fails to distinguish human beings and other animals. This extreme view distances some readers from his stand. He cites studies by research psychologist, Steve Loughnan, to substantiate his argument. However, by relying on a one source, he gives the impression that he is “cherry-picking” evidence, reducing the article’s credibility. On the other hand, McWilliams uses a wider variety of evidences, ranging from personal experiences (Para 1, 2, 3, 4), examples (Para 6, 10), statistical evidence (Para 7, 8, 9, 10, 11) and analogies (Para 13). This makes his argument more reasonable. However, his failure to cite sources for the statistical evidence slightly diminishes the reliability and objectivity of his article. Despite this, McWilliams use of a more varied evidence renders his article more
Kluger use an analogy, comparing cows to human beings, (Para 1, 2, 3) in hopes of keeping his arguments relatable. However, his analogy fails to distinguish human beings and other animals. This extreme view distances some readers from his stand. He cites studies by research psychologist, Steve Loughnan, to substantiate his argument. However, by relying on a one source, he gives the impression that he is “cherry-picking” evidence, reducing the article’s credibility. On the other hand, McWilliams uses a wider variety of evidences, ranging from personal experiences (Para 1, 2, 3, 4), examples (Para 6, 10), statistical evidence (Para 7, 8, 9, 10, 11) and analogies (Para 13). This makes his argument more reasonable. However, his failure to cite sources for the statistical evidence slightly diminishes the reliability and objectivity of his article. Despite this, McWilliams use of a more varied evidence renders his article more