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Music is an art form whose medium is sound and silence ,and to many people in many cultures, music is an important part of their way of life . Invention of the internet and copyable audio-file formats made downloading and sharing music very easy . However, this should be considered a criminal acts as downloading music for free is equal to stealing . There are several reason why downloading music for free is equal to stealing . Firstly , because it is legal issue . Music is under copyright and taking it without permission for the rightful owner is wrong despite the fact that “ everyone doing it” . Besides, artists own the rights to their music as they create the music from the scratch . As for conclusion, just because it’s easy , downloading music for free is wrong , ethically and morally .
Topic sentence : Downloading music for free is equal to stealing
1. Supporting Point Sentence : Downloading music for free is a legal issue
Example 1 Artist own the rights to their own music ,and music is under copyright
Example 2 Taking music without permission should be considered a criminal act- despite the fact that “ everyone is doing it”
2. Supporting Topic Sentence : Downloading music for free is an ethical issue
Example 1 Morality –people should know what is right and what is wrong
Example 2 No difference between taking the music for free off the internet and taking it for free out of the store
3. Supporting Topic Sentences : Downloading music for free results in a loss of income
Example 1 Few artists will stop doing music – because music won’t be a good ,stable source of income . Record companies will lose money
Example 2 Lead to fewer musicians , and less good music to listen to .
Concluding Sentence : In conclusion, just because it’s easy , and everyone is doing it , downloading music for free is wrong –