Edisto Beach-Personal Narrative
I was in Edisto beach running on an old wood dock. Not knowing that things were going to go bad fast. I hear the board snap and my sister starts screaming as if she was in a horror movie for mom. My knee was num as if it was a dead fish. I looked at me knee and knew my vacation was ruined. I got out of my car as I smelt the salty water, as the cool breeze hit me with the bright sun behind me. I was with my whole family this year and my mom’s friends had came as well. I thought this year was going to very fun because my cousin Evan tagged along. No kids come that are my age so it’s not as much fun when I am by myself. I remember when I walked out on the beach and felt the smooth, chilly sand. I felt the water with my foot as it
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I got dressed and ran to go eat breakfast, exited to see what fun activities we were going to do. My mom said we could explore, swim, or we could find something to go to that’s around us. I decided to go swimming with Evan and we played football on the beach. As I got sunburnt more and more I saw dolphins really close to shore. I thought was really cool as I could see their outline in the water. Later that day I saw them again and a women that lived there said that you can swim with them. I ran on the beach to the house to go get my suit to swim with them. I was running on an old wood dock and as I was running I heard a sharp snap from under me. My sister heard my fall and walked to me to make sure I was ok. I couldn’t feel my leg as if it was a fish that couldn’t flop anymore. My sister screamed bloody murder as if she was in a horror movie. Not understanding why I looked at my knee and then a flaming pain lit my leg as if it’s on fire. My knee had been split because a board had went into my knee and tore it open. My mom ran out as if she was supermom and saw the problem as fat hung out of my knee. I tried to walk as the cut was so deep until I started walking and it started gushing blood. My mom and dad eventually got me into the car with a sandy towel wrapped around my leg. Trying to find the closest hospital. We found a small emergency place that was 45 minutes away and on the way we found a
I got dressed and ran to go eat breakfast, exited to see what fun activities we were going to do. My mom said we could explore, swim, or we could find something to go to that’s around us. I decided to go swimming with Evan and we played football on the beach. As I got sunburnt more and more I saw dolphins really close to shore. I thought was really cool as I could see their outline in the water. Later that day I saw them again and a women that lived there said that you can swim with them. I ran on the beach to the house to go get my suit to swim with them. I was running on an old wood dock and as I was running I heard a sharp snap from under me. My sister heard my fall and walked to me to make sure I was ok. I couldn’t feel my leg as if it was a fish that couldn’t flop anymore. My sister screamed bloody murder as if she was in a horror movie. Not understanding why I looked at my knee and then a flaming pain lit my leg as if it’s on fire. My knee had been split because a board had went into my knee and tore it open. My mom ran out as if she was supermom and saw the problem as fat hung out of my knee. I tried to walk as the cut was so deep until I started walking and it started gushing blood. My mom and dad eventually got me into the car with a sandy towel wrapped around my leg. Trying to find the closest hospital. We found a small emergency place that was 45 minutes away and on the way we found a