Education
Do you agree that education is no longer the key to success?
Q-Do you agree?
K-Education, no longer, key, success
T- Education
INTRODUCTION
Education in the past had been deemed as a must for one to have a bright future. However in today’s world, the success brought about by education becomes subjective to people. This brings about many controversies as to whether education is really essential for us to succeed in life. Education exists in many forms, ranging from paper qualifications to character education, all with a common target to empower the knowledge and information of people. It is only through education that a person can be judged based on his capabilities and qualifications for his future endeavours. Personally, I feel that education caters to the various aspect of success in life. In my opinion, success is the amount of material well-being as well as the lessons learnt to value add oneself in the end. Hence I believe that education still remains as one of the key factors in life.
BODY
Point 1:
Topic Sentence:
The focus of education now is a more adaptable-based economy where creativity and the ability to adapt to various changes is the key to success.
Elaboration:
-The world has become more interconnected than before. With the use of mass media, ideas and information are widely spread throughout the world and are easily obtainable.
-Through education, people learn the skill to exhibit their opinions and make informed decisions in life with the information they acquired.
-People will acquire their own sets of solutions to problems using the resources they learnt, and are able to creatively alter working attitudes and styles to suit the needs of the society. This greatly aids them in adapting and integrating into the society quicker.
Example:
For example, Schools have begun incorporating external curricular learning where students are encouraged to expose themselves to different contents to promote critical thinking and discussion
Q-Do you agree?
K-Education, no longer, key, success
T- Education
INTRODUCTION
Education in the past had been deemed as a must for one to have a bright future. However in today’s world, the success brought about by education becomes subjective to people. This brings about many controversies as to whether education is really essential for us to succeed in life. Education exists in many forms, ranging from paper qualifications to character education, all with a common target to empower the knowledge and information of people. It is only through education that a person can be judged based on his capabilities and qualifications for his future endeavours. Personally, I feel that education caters to the various aspect of success in life. In my opinion, success is the amount of material well-being as well as the lessons learnt to value add oneself in the end. Hence I believe that education still remains as one of the key factors in life.
BODY
Point 1:
Topic Sentence:
The focus of education now is a more adaptable-based economy where creativity and the ability to adapt to various changes is the key to success.
Elaboration:
-The world has become more interconnected than before. With the use of mass media, ideas and information are widely spread throughout the world and are easily obtainable.
-Through education, people learn the skill to exhibit their opinions and make informed decisions in life with the information they acquired.
-People will acquire their own sets of solutions to problems using the resources they learnt, and are able to creatively alter working attitudes and styles to suit the needs of the society. This greatly aids them in adapting and integrating into the society quicker.
Example:
For example, Schools have begun incorporating external curricular learning where students are encouraged to expose themselves to different contents to promote critical thinking and discussion