Eng Essay
February 21,2013
Professor Pickrel:
My process for this paper is the way I write majority of most assignments. On this particular assignment I had to analyze my own writing which was tough for me to do and understand on critiquing my writing techniques. First off I had more than one draft, and this allows me to put my concepts of how I feel I write my content. Having multiple drafts gives me a chance to come with better ideas than what I have done previous. In this paper I had an opportunity to have a workshop with my classmate to give me feedback, to inform me of mistakes I have made, and to give me more ideas to improve my work. I found out I did not have a strong enough thesis to make my supporting paragraphs relate back to my thesis. From the feedback I was able to revise my draft to form a better thesis, have stronger support of my topic sentences, and give examples so my reader may understand my collage essay more clearer. That was a great tool I learned from my workshop partners and my professor. I believe my strengths in this paper is now my thesis my supporting of my topic sentence structure, and my grammar with examples to give a visual to my writer.
Sincerely,
Henry Rumph
Henry Rumph
Prof. Pickerel
Eng 300
02/21/2013
Writing is a way that people use to communicate with each other. There are many ways that can benefit from writing, especially when you can’t confront a person face to face, and also when you are not able to speak to someone via phone. Whether you are talking to a colleague, your boss, or someone in high position, you must understand the proper way to address them. We must be able to represent ourselves in a proper way when writing to those associates. In important writings we must be able to write in proper grammar and punctuations. Imagine writing to a future employer, if you have poor grammar it might affect a person being hired on by that company. The only acceptable way of not getting criticized in your writing is to
Professor Pickrel:
My process for this paper is the way I write majority of most assignments. On this particular assignment I had to analyze my own writing which was tough for me to do and understand on critiquing my writing techniques. First off I had more than one draft, and this allows me to put my concepts of how I feel I write my content. Having multiple drafts gives me a chance to come with better ideas than what I have done previous. In this paper I had an opportunity to have a workshop with my classmate to give me feedback, to inform me of mistakes I have made, and to give me more ideas to improve my work. I found out I did not have a strong enough thesis to make my supporting paragraphs relate back to my thesis. From the feedback I was able to revise my draft to form a better thesis, have stronger support of my topic sentences, and give examples so my reader may understand my collage essay more clearer. That was a great tool I learned from my workshop partners and my professor. I believe my strengths in this paper is now my thesis my supporting of my topic sentence structure, and my grammar with examples to give a visual to my writer.
Sincerely,
Henry Rumph
Henry Rumph
Prof. Pickerel
Eng 300
02/21/2013
Writing is a way that people use to communicate with each other. There are many ways that can benefit from writing, especially when you can’t confront a person face to face, and also when you are not able to speak to someone via phone. Whether you are talking to a colleague, your boss, or someone in high position, you must understand the proper way to address them. We must be able to represent ourselves in a proper way when writing to those associates. In important writings we must be able to write in proper grammar and punctuations. Imagine writing to a future employer, if you have poor grammar it might affect a person being hired on by that company. The only acceptable way of not getting criticized in your writing is to