English Report Writing

ERS ASSIGNMENT

1. List of Changes

Cover Page

• There is no name, student number, coach and date

• The title should be revised to fit the context of the report

Executive Summary

• There is none

Table of Contents

• It should not list “table of contents” itself

• Page numbers should start after the table of contents, not from the cover page

• “Bibliography” should be numbered

Introduction

• The thesis statement is not clear

• It is better to divide the fist paragraph into to two separate paragraphs

(One is for the opening quotation; the other is for the case of KiK)

Methodology

• The first paragraph is not relevant

• It should not use personal pronouns (“my” and “I”)

• The way how the research has been done should be mentioned

• Description of the sources used and the reason why these sources are used should be mentioned

• It is not necessary to mention the use of a dictionary

• Limitations on the scope and extent of the research should be mentioned

Main Body

• Wrong footnotes of every chapters

• A linking preview could be used at the beginning of each chapter to make the report smooth and corresponding

3.1 Company Description

The paragraphs is not in logical order

The Slogan should be translated

The history is too detailed, some information is not necessary

2. Recent Scandals

The first sentence is not relevant

It is not good to use a quote as a whole paragraph

4 EU Regulations

It shows no relationship with the previous case

It is better to put this chapter 4 before chapter 3 as criteria

5.1 Corporate Responsibility

The first sentence of this subchapter looks like a quote while there is no mark

Some statement should be added to make it relevant with the previous case

There are no