Type: Block Method
Title: To have various types of entertainments in Fiji, examine the advantages and disadvantages of these on the people in Fiji.
Introduction
Context: Entertainment may provide fun, enjoyable and laughter but in the other hand it has its drawbacks.
Subject: Fiji is indeed one of the best entertainment options with its wide variety of activities that will benefit the country socially and economically.
Limited
Subject: Disadvantages of this may lead to steer people away from study and work.
Issue: Your mind diverts away from your day to day worries and tensions and you are able to divert your mind from the normal schedule.
Thesis
Statement: This essay will examine on the advantages and disadvantages of entertainment on the people of Fiji.
Support for Thesis
ADVANTAGES
Main idea 1 : Social impact of entertainment in Fiji
Supporting
Idea A: a) Reserve a good health e.g sports b) Reduce stress e.g music, television c) social networking e.g internet d) gives individuals a break from work and daily chores e) fun
Main idea 2 : Economic impact of entertainment
Supporting
Idea B: a) gain scholarship e.g sports b) earn income e.g music c) access to job opportunity and more employment opportunity e.g internet d) main income in Fiji e) increase in currency f) improve standard of living g) poverty rate will decrease h) some places can become popular (e.g Beqa-fire walking)
DISADVANTAGES
Main idea 3 : Drawback of social contact of entertainment
Supporting
Idea A : a) affects the children’s cultures in Fiji b) Addictive and keep away from work & education c) end up spending too much time in entertaining and forget to do work d) may risk losing friends e.g spend more time in video games e) lose touch with family members
Main idea 4 :