It is a very short story on paper, but when it does not feel that way when reading it. Hidden in the pages is a sense of longing, lust, happiness, and in the end, heartache and desperation. The words and sentences are structured in such a way that the pace of the tale moves with the feelings being conveyed. When happiness is the emotion expressed, the sentences are longer. When anger emerges, the sentence structure becomes choppy and simple. Beautiful images are created through the simplistic use of language. “Living in the muddy, rainy town in the winter,” produces a chilling cold image that is easily envisioned; not only to establish a moment in time, but to express the bitterness of an emotion emerging from the storyteller (66). Though the words are limited, the images they produce are
It is a very short story on paper, but when it does not feel that way when reading it. Hidden in the pages is a sense of longing, lust, happiness, and in the end, heartache and desperation. The words and sentences are structured in such a way that the pace of the tale moves with the feelings being conveyed. When happiness is the emotion expressed, the sentences are longer. When anger emerges, the sentence structure becomes choppy and simple. Beautiful images are created through the simplistic use of language. “Living in the muddy, rainy town in the winter,” produces a chilling cold image that is easily envisioned; not only to establish a moment in time, but to express the bitterness of an emotion emerging from the storyteller (66). Though the words are limited, the images they produce are