Ess1101 Reflection

Last year I wrote a mid-term reflection for my ENC1101 class, and it was a summary of how I didn’t take writing serious. However, I had improved as the semester progressed. In ENC1102 I wrote my first essay, and I received my first C on a paper, and it bothers me. I know I could’ve done way better. All the grammatical errors I exhibiting weren’t intentional, and it could be solved through the reading of my paper out loud. My issues within my paper in regards to my arguments are not a great issue, but I do not incorporate enough evidence to support my claims, hence making my argument diminish in strength. With my second paper, I tried to incorporate more quotes and evidence into paper. I also have tried to include information that was not discussed
during lecture, however I don’t know how to put all my thoughts together on to a paper to were ideas are concise and when one reads my paper, he can read it with little to no problems. I don’t seem to have many organizational issues, but some sentence formatting could have been improved, through the reading of my paper out loud or letting someone else reading it paper. In regards to my audience I have avoided the use of slang and informal language, however the use of contextual information that my audience might have no knowledge of already.
I have laid out my strength and weakness and I hope to learn from the new issues that have been brought to my attention.