Author: Fernando Alex Tambue Guiffo
Evaluated by: Articulation Evaluation 10 (evaluator's name is not visible to author)
Date Evaluated: 08/07/2015 05:38:46 PM (MDT)
DRF template: Financial Analysis (GR, JET20513)
Program: Financial Analysis (GR, JET20513)
Evaluation Method: Using Rubric
Evaluation Summary for Financial Analysis: JET Task 5
Final Score: Does not Meet
Evaluator added files:
GUIFFO, FERNANDO A. T. JET2_task5.8715.pdf (Adobe Acrobat Document)
Overall comments: 8/7/15ARTICULATIONThe submitted paper is aptly written in an informational tone. The writing displays sentence fluency, word choice and conventions errors throughout the work disrupting the flow of the writing.
Please consider accessing available learning resources that support writing skill development. Student mentors and the Center of Writing Excellence can provide assistance in accessing these resources.
The Articulation review is not meant to be a comprehensive review of every error within the submission, but is intended to point out specific recurring challenges found within the submission. A few representative examples of the articulation errors noted are included in the attached document.
A Content Evaluator evaluated the content requirements for this submission, while an Articulation of Response Evaluator evaluated the articulation requirements.
08/06/15CONTENT: Please confer with a course mentor before working further on this assessment. The Future Performance, Internal and External Risks and
Recommendation aspects are complete, and the final financing Presentation is exemplary! Nicely done! The remaining tasks have logic and data issues that will require significant updates. The inclusion of the workbook, particularly for the
Potential Returns and Summary discussions, is needed to verify the data used. A different perspective may be useful in the successful completion of this task.
Live study links have been included within the evaluation