explanatory essay 9/11
I.S.278 Kiran Suhail
7-12 6/18/14 Culminating Short Story Draft
Once upon a time, on mars three heroic and dashing boys lived there, Ponyboy, Johnny and Dally. Dally was as bold and courageous as a hawk. Ponyboy was very welcoming and kind. And Johnny was quite shy. His words gave a curious satisfaction. They were all as dazzling as the white snow in sunshine. They wondered and thought about the divergent world back on earth. One morning, a shy little girl approached them. She was as frail as a flower. She had eyes as deeply dark as the desert skies. Her cheeks were like the blushing clouds, her hair hung down like summer twilight and her face was as pale as lead. Her name was Margo. She informed the three boys that they needed to get back to earth since their close friends Salva and Lennie were being held by the Socs. A rebellious group that was so harsh and dangerous like a living meteor. She told them that they must go to Earth and find three crystal gems that when held up together at sunset during the summer solstice would release Salva and Lennie from enchanted and cursed chains they’ve been trapped in. Ponyboy Johnny and Dally were getting furious and excited for the journey like a wave of the sea driven with the wind and tossed. They were preparing for a life changing journey. The next morning the three boy got all the supplies from Margo. She gave them magical dust that they poured on their selves at sunrise. They suddenly ere transporting to the magical island of Enchantica. It was an illuminating sight. Vibrant rainbows filled the skies, five foot tall flowers reached soaring heights and there were beautiful flying unicorns it was like a world of sunshine. They had to reach to a magical ocean in which laid the first blue gem. They
7-12 6/18/14 Culminating Short Story Draft
Once upon a time, on mars three heroic and dashing boys lived there, Ponyboy, Johnny and Dally. Dally was as bold and courageous as a hawk. Ponyboy was very welcoming and kind. And Johnny was quite shy. His words gave a curious satisfaction. They were all as dazzling as the white snow in sunshine. They wondered and thought about the divergent world back on earth. One morning, a shy little girl approached them. She was as frail as a flower. She had eyes as deeply dark as the desert skies. Her cheeks were like the blushing clouds, her hair hung down like summer twilight and her face was as pale as lead. Her name was Margo. She informed the three boys that they needed to get back to earth since their close friends Salva and Lennie were being held by the Socs. A rebellious group that was so harsh and dangerous like a living meteor. She told them that they must go to Earth and find three crystal gems that when held up together at sunset during the summer solstice would release Salva and Lennie from enchanted and cursed chains they’ve been trapped in. Ponyboy Johnny and Dally were getting furious and excited for the journey like a wave of the sea driven with the wind and tossed. They were preparing for a life changing journey. The next morning the three boy got all the supplies from Margo. She gave them magical dust that they poured on their selves at sunrise. They suddenly ere transporting to the magical island of Enchantica. It was an illuminating sight. Vibrant rainbows filled the skies, five foot tall flowers reached soaring heights and there were beautiful flying unicorns it was like a world of sunshine. They had to reach to a magical ocean in which laid the first blue gem. They