Facing Poverty with a Rich Girl’s Habit
Running Head: Facing Poverty with a Rich Girl’s Habit
page number?
Title must be all in capital letters; this is the title of the essay; it must also be put in quotation marks
Rich Girl’s Habit Winston Carter Strayer University ENG 115
October 27, 2013
assignment 1.1
incorrect header
Running Head: Facing Poverty with a Rich Girl’s Habit
Rich Girl’s Habits
use author's last name only after the first refere
In “Facing Poverty with a Rich Girl’s Habits” by Suki Kim, Su alks about how a keep elements parallel do not use first person; write objectively
Korean girl went fr rupt. I think that her most
comma; pp. 501-514wrong word form important point is that she is now a Korean-American. For her this mea ven up who she is as
Having once lived Kim a person and her cultural inheritance. By once living amongst the wealthy in Korea, Suki is now
living with the people in the city of Queens, New York in the 1980’s and now being identified as
Korean-American. Dealing with economic hardship, Kim had to adapt to the situation.
does not make sense
-driven to be replaced by
comma splice; p. 454
13 was daunting to say east,
gone were the days of chauffeur limousines and replaced with public transportation to school for
the first time. The challenge of managing through homework without her family or the assistancdeoes not make
of an aide was a change that Suki could not have prepared for.
Furthermore,
F Suki’s essay details another of her most important social learning points by
explaining the challenge of a Queen’s, Ne w York c l a ssroom environment where students were
displaying affection openly in class, as
h her
very wordy
nt. conclude the paragraph
wordy
Suki also expressed another significant point i or. Suki
referenced the color yellow as to a flower she was familiar with from home. A flower called Forsythia from
page number?
Title must be all in capital letters; this is the title of the essay; it must also be put in quotation marks
Rich Girl’s Habit Winston Carter Strayer University ENG 115
October 27, 2013
assignment 1.1
incorrect header
Running Head: Facing Poverty with a Rich Girl’s Habit
Rich Girl’s Habits
use author's last name only after the first refere
In “Facing Poverty with a Rich Girl’s Habits” by Suki Kim, Su alks about how a keep elements parallel do not use first person; write objectively
Korean girl went fr rupt. I think that her most
comma; pp. 501-514wrong word form important point is that she is now a Korean-American. For her this mea ven up who she is as
Having once lived Kim a person and her cultural inheritance. By once living amongst the wealthy in Korea, Suki is now
living with the people in the city of Queens, New York in the 1980’s and now being identified as
Korean-American. Dealing with economic hardship, Kim had to adapt to the situation.
does not make sense
-driven to be replaced by
comma splice; p. 454
13 was daunting to say east,
gone were the days of chauffeur limousines and replaced with public transportation to school for
the first time. The challenge of managing through homework without her family or the assistancdeoes not make
of an aide was a change that Suki could not have prepared for.
Furthermore,
F Suki’s essay details another of her most important social learning points by
explaining the challenge of a Queen’s, Ne w York c l a ssroom environment where students were
displaying affection openly in class, as
h her
very wordy
nt. conclude the paragraph
wordy
Suki also expressed another significant point i or. Suki
referenced the color yellow as to a flower she was familiar with from home. A flower called Forsythia from