Fair And Fast Argumentative Analysis

The topic sentence is clear in this paragraph but is missing information. I expected to be reading about Vancity’s launch of Fair and Fast and that is what is included; detailed information was given to expand on what is Fair and Fast and how it operates. I do think that topic sentence should have included talking about low-income needs in order for me to anticipate the information included in the paragraph where Jerry Buckland is quoted and his experiences and expertise is quoted to support the need for small short-term bank loans that available to more people. I would have it read: In June 2014, Vancity launched Fair and Fast, offering sums between $100 and $1,500, addressing a need to serve low-income Canadians. By including the key points