Two examples of imagery Lauinger wrote were line five, “I’d light your Camels, pour your Jack;” and line three, “When you got up to scramble eggs.” The imagery in these lines and the others help the poem come to life off of the page. Another element that helps the poem come alive is figurative language. One example of figurative language is the hyperbole in lines 17 and 18, “You’re in it, doll, up to your eyeballs! Tears? Please! You’ll dilute our highballs,” An additional example of figurative language lies in line 15, “You didn’t know the pearls were fake …,” which I feel is a metaphor for the fake relationship that she is in and always relies on for her scams. The last element that brings this poem to life is sound. The poem has an example of onomatopoeia in line 24 using the word buzz to denote the sound of a telephone ringing. The poem also has examples of alliteration in line 12, “And bitter with the bittersweet,” and line 16, “Make no mistake.” The poem “Marvell Noir” is an end rhyme as the last syllable in each couplet rhyme. The rhyme scheme for this poem is aabbccddeeff…rr.. Out of all the poems I read in the poetry unit “Marvell Noir” by Ann Lauinger was one of my
Two examples of imagery Lauinger wrote were line five, “I’d light your Camels, pour your Jack;” and line three, “When you got up to scramble eggs.” The imagery in these lines and the others help the poem come to life off of the page. Another element that helps the poem come alive is figurative language. One example of figurative language is the hyperbole in lines 17 and 18, “You’re in it, doll, up to your eyeballs! Tears? Please! You’ll dilute our highballs,” An additional example of figurative language lies in line 15, “You didn’t know the pearls were fake …,” which I feel is a metaphor for the fake relationship that she is in and always relies on for her scams. The last element that brings this poem to life is sound. The poem has an example of onomatopoeia in line 24 using the word buzz to denote the sound of a telephone ringing. The poem also has examples of alliteration in line 12, “And bitter with the bittersweet,” and line 16, “Make no mistake.” The poem “Marvell Noir” is an end rhyme as the last syllable in each couplet rhyme. The rhyme scheme for this poem is aabbccddeeff…rr.. Out of all the poems I read in the poetry unit “Marvell Noir” by Ann Lauinger was one of my