Figurative Language In The Crucible

In the small portion of text provide from a diary entry I wrote based upon a character from “The Crucible”, which was written during my sophomore year of high school. Upon reading the text provided it’s clear to see that I was relying heavily on the figurative language of imagery. Due to the fact that, it allowed me to create a vivid mental image into the minds of my readers, drawing them in and making the reader want to read more. With this its clear to see that just like how I would use facts to prove claims, I would use details to pull them in.
To elaborate, unlike most paper’s where I have to use details to support a claim, I was given the task of making a small short story that went along with the story and had my own personal twist as