The author includes a quote from one of the most influential people in their life, Colonel Murphy, who stressed the importance of hard work that matters due to life’s transience. Colonel Murphy stated that “‘[w]hen it is time for you to leave…you make sure you have worked hard to make sure it mattered you were ever here’” (Moore 133). This had an impact on the author which caused him to view life differently and consider it more precious. To make this message powerful, the author uses imagery to take advantage of the senses and build them into something vividly real in the reader’s mind. The author cleverly wrote that “[t]he hard wooden pews forced [them] to sit up straight” (Moore 133) in order to create the sense of paying close attention. This helps the reader mentally visualize the scene which helps engage the reader’s
The author includes a quote from one of the most influential people in their life, Colonel Murphy, who stressed the importance of hard work that matters due to life’s transience. Colonel Murphy stated that “‘[w]hen it is time for you to leave…you make sure you have worked hard to make sure it mattered you were ever here’” (Moore 133). This had an impact on the author which caused him to view life differently and consider it more precious. To make this message powerful, the author uses imagery to take advantage of the senses and build them into something vividly real in the reader’s mind. The author cleverly wrote that “[t]he hard wooden pews forced [them] to sit up straight” (Moore 133) in order to create the sense of paying close attention. This helps the reader mentally visualize the scene which helps engage the reader’s