Final Draft By Aldo

Aldo Cabanas
Mrs.Carreras
Language Arts
3-11-14
Final Draft
What dangers await a student inside a classroom? Not many actually, but in an overcrowded classroom many things can go wrong.
To begin with, there are many threats that can occur inside the classroom. One of these threats are small but very harmful injuries. Some students might trip on the over flow of other students personal belongings. Some students might even get cloister phobic and cause the student to have a horrible panic attack. On the other hand, a way to solve this problem is to make the rooms bigger, extend the classroom. Along with more space and better walking ability. However, the problem with this is a huge amount of money would be wasted from the school when it could be used for extra circular activities. In addition the process of extending the classroom takes many days maybe weeks or months. There are many threats that are laid out in the classroom that students must avoid
Along, with all the harmful problems in an overcrowded classroom comes the problem of distractions. One of these distractions is listening, there attention will not be on the educator it will be on anything around them. Interaction with their fellow classmates can take away their attention along with their education. An argument towards this method could be group work. Students can be assigned group work to share ideas and influence each other. Maybe even finish faster with consistent work. The catch with this would be is it goes the opposite way to unproductive. Students blowing of work with the result of no assignments finished. Students can carry on conversations besides there assignments instead of completing it.
In a classroom with an over flowing class of students there attention will be hard to capture this would not benefit them. Many teachers have a hard time capturing the attention of the students as it is. Students listening skills might drop along with their academic grade. Especially with the students that can care less about their education. A way to fix this problem could be hiring an extra teacher or assistant, to check on the students and help out. Another way is better discipline. The flaw with hiring more staff members is more expenses the school will pay for their checks. Now, what if teachers call in sick? What then? Will the assistant take charge? These unanswered questions are also a problem that will have to be answered. If the solution for this is a substitute, how would they deal with this inside a classroom of overflowing classroom with no clue of the system. I bought this would benefit the students at all.
At the end of the day all this trouble is not worth it all if the students get no benefit from it. These problems are a great threat injuries, attention problem, and distractions. None of this will benefit our students at all. As an individual I ask of your help to fight stop a problem of an overcrowded classroom mistake from happening. Our students need a staff place to be educated. I challenge the reader to help fight for the space the students need for a better education and a brighter future.